Granite Evidence

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• joopschotsman (5583)
• [2007-08-19 10:55]

Oke, this one is good. And indeed, more focus in the mirror than in the original face ....
Beautiful nature outside overthere !
greetings,
Joop!

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• hay_kes (57689)
• [2007-08-19 14:38]

Hi Prasan,
What a great portrait.Colours, light and reflection are perfect..Well done.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

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• tjutjut (15954)
• [2007-08-20 5:03]

Hi Prasan,

Great concept to capture both the real and the reflection . . yes, it's a bit not focus on the lady, but the overall is interesting to see . . Lighting angle is perfectly fine . . It may be better if you don't cut her left hand, and you may crop the left right window, it's my preference . . Hope you don't mind . .
Excellent presentation.

Tfs,
Tjutjut

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• jan515 (17484)
• [2007-08-20 10:27]

Hello Prasan, what a beautiful portrait,reflektion,light and composition are perfect.
TFS.
Janusz

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• harpya (10192)
• [2007-08-21 9:06]
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Hello Prasan

I am happy, I see that gave our good results final success, yours and mine. Congratulations, all for you!


Sérgio
:)

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• remi_totem (391)
• [2007-08-22 14:42]

Hi prasan,

nice prtrait.
The composition, light and colors are great.
I like the reflexion.

bravo,
Remi.

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• gunershot (20562)
• [2007-09-04 10:20]

Hi Prasan,
Beautiful portrait.
nice soft reflection.
Thanks for sharing.
M.D.Seyfettin Güner

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• fotomek (751)
• [2007-10-23 4:55]
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certainly interesting shot, namely the model's pose and her reflection in the table top; however there are 2 bad things here: one is a tilt (can be easily corrected by rotation by +0,2 or +0,3 deg.), while the second one unfortunately cannot... (your focus somehow 'escaped' somewhere to the BG);
once or twice I tried to rescue my shots by adding much noise thus producing an artistic effect rather than a simple photo... I'll try here as well (WS) hope you do not mind..
cheers - Tomasz

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• rewshearer (21123)
• [2007-10-24 13:13]
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Hi Prasan

Certainly a nice idea, and a pity that it didn't quite work out, but kudos to you for the experiment!

I suspsect if you had focused on your subject, the whole image would've taken care of itself. Other, more subtle details (like the hand on the right obscured by the shutter - and the wristwatch!!) are easily taken care of.

The light, the metering, and the setting here are all very good. I can see you have talent and good ideas, so I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.

Rew

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• MLINES (8520)
• [2007-11-11 13:16]
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Hi Prasan. I like the creative way this is presented. The open window shutters and the greenery outside is excellent. Suggest try this at different times of the day. TFS. Murray.