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• mikio (429)
• [2007-08-23 8:19]
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Hi Jesus,

Well composed and interesting material!
I like the combination between birds sitting to torch and sky with random clouds. If I say the desire, it's better to change frame color and suppress blue color of sky a bit for drawing the effect out in the entire image because it seems same strong color tone of sky, black torch & birds and black frame.
I tried a workshop from another angle, yet this is my taste and I hope that you don't mind.
(P.S)
I also took same type picture at the park near my house, however this is more attractive than mine, because this torch is more good than electric wire about the object birds are sitting.

Thanks for sharing!

Regards,
mikio

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• nova (8653)
• [2007-08-23 17:00]

Great picture.I like your POV,very creative and attractive.Very well composed.TFS
Michel

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• Nanita (1146)
• [2007-10-23 12:39]

Qué maravilla, me gusta la forma de mirar el cielo que tienes, es especial.

un saludo, nanita