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Ottoman Band


Ottoman Band
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Copyright: Selin Arslan (designer) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 0] (115)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-30
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/20 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-30 23:31
Viewed: 589
Points: 8
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Hi Selin,
nice to meet you and your gallery! This one is a very good photo if I look at the subject, but if I look at the details I want to tell you a few little advices that I've learned here on TL. First of all your shot is against the light - this is a bad thing because the photo will be overexposed, so you must be careful to shot the photo with the light from your "back". Second of all the subject has his had and foots cut off :) You must be careful too have all the subject in your photo (except if you do a portrait of course). Than the subjct must be uncentered - in here I must say that your subject is just a little centered. I like the frame :) So this is just my oppinion. You always must listen your "feelings" when you shot a photo. So, please don't mind about my comment. Hope to see you soon.
Welcome on TL my friend!

Have a lovely day!
Ioana

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 124 N: 1437] (20268)
  • [2007-09-03 2:36]

Sevgili Selin ,güzel bir kompozisyon seçmişsin.Tebrikler.Daha net fotoğraflarında görüşmek üzere.

Hi dear Selin, I never saw an ottoman band before, thx for sharing.
You do well for a 13 years old.
Here there is a slight problem with the coming lignt, but this comes with practice.
Keep on doing photography, it is such a wonderful art!

Take care, Yan :)

pl

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  • filiz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 204 W: 0 N: 81] (1131)
  • [2007-10-26 8:51]

Merhaba Selin,
Renkler ve kompozisyon çok hoş ancak karşıdan gelen aşırı ışık görüntüyü olumsuz etkilemiş. Yine de hoş bir çekim olmuş.

Tebrikler.....Filiz

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