Geometric Sunset

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• GreenBaron (48812)
• [2007-09-13 16:11]

Hi Donna,
What a fine composition! All the different lines makes it an attractive picture. You have had a good eye for this view. Super colours, excellent framing!
TFS
Hans

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• eyesthetix (8706)
• [2007-09-13 16:11]

Hi Donna,
nice patterns/shapes. The image is nicely finished with the backlighting and the crisp silhouettes.
perhaps it may have worked even better without the diagonal bit - top left. but that could just be me.

Well done.
best regards, Daniel

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• kbeall (3576)
• [2007-09-13 16:31]

Hi Donna,
I'm out of smileys, so I'll have to come back tomorrow, but I couldn't let it go unsaid how great a shot this is, with the metal grids over the sunset. The darker clouds accentuate the sunset, and your note is priceless as well!
All the best,
Karen

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• seneca77 (2097)
• [2007-09-13 17:27]

Hi Donna,

Been to Sandusky and Cedar Point many times, although it's been quite a few years so I'm sure it's changed a lot. Your price list was, well priceless! Just be glad you didn't want to go into the amusement park itself - you'd go broke.

Anyway, great picture - I love the graphical quality with the beautiful warm colors in the background and the strong black lines of the rollercoasters. Like Daniel, I'm not sure about the diagonal in the upper left corner...I kind of go back and forth on it. I think it adds some context because without it, e.g. if you had cropped it away, it might not be apparent that we were looking at supports for a rollercoaster. So in the end, I guess it's good that it's there.

The foreground elements in silhouette are also a nice touch, and give the whole image a sense of scale and provide a nice bottom frame.

NIcely done - and congrats on beating your husband in mini golf!

- Bob

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• TasmaniaC (5442)
• [2007-09-13 17:37]
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Hi Donna, very unusual and I catching sunset shot.. I like the repetition and the symmetry.. I prepared a ws, hope you don't mind.. thanks

aK

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• allanbarredo (7765)
• [2007-09-13 18:05]

Hi Donna,

Very nice geometric patterns! Coupled with a sunset view, this is perfect! TFS

Allan

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• gnada (21687)
• [2007-09-13 18:37]

Very nice and attractive pictures Donna...
Nice architectural scene and a beautiful sun-set...
Interesting story. Very good shot - Wel dan, George

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• hay_kes (56562)
• [2007-09-13 23:00]

Hi Donna,
What a gerat shot, sharp, colours, graphism and details are superb..TFS.
Regards.
Have a nice day.

hAyAti

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• John_F_Kennedy (10281)
• [2007-09-13 23:49]

Very attractive shot. Very good point of view. I like sky colours and details on your picture.
Best wishes,
Achim

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• Silke (23588)
• [2007-09-14 3:05]

The clean crisp lines are superb and the way you have captured the graphic lines against the sunset is outstanding.
A superb posting
Lovely to have you back
TFs
silke

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• wkshelton (8580)
• [2007-09-14 4:06]

Hello donna,

i like it well done with great colors Bg POv DOf excllent details very crisp well composed and captured photo

TFS Kyle
PT

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• Pops71 (2093)
• [2007-09-14 5:53]

Hi Donna,
Please to hear that you have enjoyed the summer with your husband. Wonderful POV of the sunset with all these lines. Great colors and sharpness. Congrats. TFS
Greetings
Pierre
Many thanks for your comment on "Wait! Wait!"

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• Lanaud (917)
• [2007-09-14 17:51]

Excelent view Donna. The colours are superb and the crop perfect.

I'd have let your husband win at least ONE game...
(*_^)

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• linus (10761)
• [2007-09-14 19:44]

Hi Donna,
Beautiful composition. I like the patterns of the steel structure against the setting sun. Well done.
Sunil

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• stery (2036)
• [2007-09-15 0:46]

Hy Donna!
The colours are superb and the crop perfect
The darker clouds accentuate the sunset, and your note is priceless as well!
All the best,
Regards
STERY

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• ttreen (15902)
• [2007-09-15 14:13]
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Hi Donna...
funny notes.. Yes Priceless.. just like the MC ads! very well put together notes..

Amazing photo all the lines.. perfect sunset.. I had to took for a little to see what I was looking at!

Tricia

ps Sorry to hear about the flu... better to have it while hubby is at work... then be sick when they are home! IMHO

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• clnaef (5769)
• [2007-09-16 9:29]

Bonjour,
Belles silhouettes dans un environnement remarquable.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

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• pablominto (27446)
• [2007-09-19 2:34]

Hello Donna,
Good graphical representation!
The structures are cleverly used to make strong silhouettes on the sunset background, the dramatic sky makes an interesting background!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• inaam (1376)
• [2007-09-26 15:50]

Hello Donna,

In this image the uniqueness is the selection of point of view. An excellent placement of the range finder. Beautifully composed moment in an awesome composition. Excellent photographs my friend, well done.

Thanks for sharing this.

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• Refugee (25542)
• [2007-10-03 1:13]
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Nicely composed Donna with good lines and curves. Soft colours and bold silhouettes. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘City Park VIII’

PS that was one expensive day out.

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• harpya (9643)
• [2007-10-04 10:50]

Hello Donna

Beautiful geometry, still more with one of my favorite themes of bottom still enriching more these metal architecture.
I like the capture, and of the scenery.
Congratulations

Sérgio

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• k-2 (3541)
• [2007-10-11 20:10]

Colours and geometries well captured. TFS. K2

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• abramhowitz (796)
• [2007-12-20 14:40]

Exellent!!!
As Mr Burns say.
Magnific catch,very expressive and soft.
I love that geometric ways in front of the deep view.
Congrats and happy christmas for you!!!
:)