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Veiled


Veiled
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Copyright: David Lazar (dvlazar) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 37] (271)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): FACES: [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-16 19:47
Viewed: 449
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There is power in shooting your subject with a scarf or veil around their face. It seems to lead the eye straigh to the model's face and her eyes, as it's framing the subject with the frame.
I experimented with Amanda with various poses using a veil during our shoot together.
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Impressive portrait - beautiful model. I really like the use of light and shadow and the colour tones. Nice eye contact - effective use of the veil to frame the face.

Ppwerful look David!

Effective composition , and great light . Very good eye-contact and expression of your model. A beautiful portrait. the dark environment is great , the brownish halo is just perfect to provide more depth.
Well done !
Robert

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  • ralph Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 179 W: 13 N: 253] (3633)
  • [2007-09-16 20:27]

A striking photo David,...white,red,skin tone and a silhouette.Great space and cropping.
Nico

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1324 W: 103 N: 2310] (8724)
  • [2007-09-16 20:46]

Hi DL.

Excellent work, and a fine image the result !!

Salutes.

JP

very nice model, nice portrait, and sharpnes is very good

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1019 W: 8 N: 0] (7375)
  • [2007-09-16 22:54]

Hi
Very nice fashion shot...Nice portrait...

Very nice one again.

great one, even if it seems you PP the skin a bit too hard. ;)

TFS

Olivier

Hi David, this is really dynamic! You got the color of the model's face just right for the black bg and veil. This reminds me of something in the Middle East or somewhere as it once was back in year's past. TFS

She is gorgeous, David. And you took a fine portrait of her. There must be a good relationship between photographer and model in order to get such a good image. I like her skin tones and the veil covering both the LH side of her face and her fingers. There is a sense of secrecy. Well done and TFS! Cordelia :)))

wow!!!
those eyes!!
very nicely done
MAX!

Excellent and amazing shot is really great, congratulations, and very pretty model... best regards... TFS... Fernando

Bonjour David,
Lovely composition of this portrait, excellent tone and point de view, beautiful colors and sharpness picture, great model soo and beautiful eyes..Well done.
Michel
Many thanks for your comments on my picture : Autumn scene.

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