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parasol
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Copyright: Akihisa Kitanosono (AKITA) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1006 W: 81 N: 66] (12168)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2001-03-21
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-09-23 0:26
Viewed: 749
Points: 18
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To NEWART: Thank youAKITA 1 10-01 12:30
To sorin_m: Thank youAKITA 1 09-24 07:15
To pablominto: Thank youAKITA 1 09-24 07:11
To lenazap: Thank youAKITA 1 09-23 13:44
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Perfect composition, i posted workshop.

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2007-09-23 15:26]

Hi Akihisa,
Wow! Great shot! Mystery in the picture, I like much. The colors are splendid. Thanks
Best wishes
Diane

ciao Akihisha..
perfect composition, i agree with Lenezap.. i like also his workshop.. a little impressionist..
the shot lives for this girl.. it's a dream to think to have a meeting with a girl like this.. so sofisticated.. on the seaside alone.. it's my dream, i suppose.. nice pov, girl position is really centrated.. the background is wonderfull.. nice and perfect detail with this parasol..
TFS
ciao ciao Marco

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  • hcvvmk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 410 W: 75 N: 308] (2405)
  • [2007-09-23 20:43]

Hie Akihisa kun,

I've just came back from my Hokkaido and Tokyo trip. Ok here's my commment, I think for this shot you should closeup a little on that model so that we could have a larger image of her.

TFS,
Hong

P.S.
Furano is a very great place.

Hi Akihisa

The lady with the parasol transforms an ordinary shot in to a quite striking image. Perhaps a slight ccw rotation? Good work overall. Congratulations!

Hello Akihisa,
I like the loneliness in the scenery!
Also the mystery is appealing as I cannot see her face...
I was temped to play a little, the result is in the WS!
Greetings,
Pablo -

beautiful capture Akihisa.
i realy like the discreet presence of the subjects with her face hidden behind the parasol. and the landscape is wonderful.
thank you.
sorin

This is wonderful composition and colors ......... !

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  • diem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 108 W: 5 N: 35] (487)
  • [2007-10-07 9:33]

Hi Akihisa,
I like it very much, calm landscape, water, mountains. I like also this kind of photos, where human is small, and huge nature in the background, it's meaningfull.
Best regards:)
Karolina

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