Life in a Daoist Temple

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• Silke (23588)
• [2007-10-06 1:38]
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Hi David
I can see clearly what you're after here. I love the colours throughout, and the fine details in the foreground subjects: a very sound idea.
Now -- keeping in mind that this is art and art is subjective -- here's my suggestion: I would decentralize this a little more, even though you have a fairly square image. It is almost too stable -- too un-dynamic.
One could accomplish some of this simply by cropping IF you have more to play with in the original capture.
If not, I would suggest another visit to the same temple for a reshoot, assuming that this was taken in a town you can get to easily.
I am going to try a small workshop to show you what I mean.
TFS
silke
:D (for the colours and details :D)

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• Colorful (16)
• [2007-10-06 22:45]

Hi,Hi,
This is a cool pic.I hope you took this pic with peaceful heart.:)I like the colors and how the temple behind ...
Cheers!
Leanne

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• janneman (1001)
• [2007-10-11 6:07]
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David, indien je de bedoeling had om aan te geven
" het is daar een fleurig gevang "
( die drie wierrookstokken lijken op tralies )
dan ben je voor mij geslaagd.
If not, dan had ik denkelijk toch een ander fotostandpunt gekozen.
Ik probeer me ook voor te stellen dat je scherptediepte omdraait : stokken onscherp, tempel scherp.

Groetjes

Jan