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Stand By Me
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
When the night has come
And the land is dark
And the moon is the only light we'll see
No I won't be afraid, no I won't be afraid
Just as long as you stand, stand by me...
-- Stand By Me (Sung by Ben E. King) |
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Hi catherine.
nice shoot and great composition with lighting from the left side.
well done.
- karith
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The green tones and simple composition work wonders in this image. Empty chairs like this are often curious and symbolic, am impression you have captured well. I think I would have liked to see the whole chair on the left, or maybe less of it, to avoid the look of an accidental crop on that side, but the overall scene is still superb. I love the light and mood, and the possible stories:)
I think it would have looked better if you did not crop out the rest of the chair. Besides that, great lighting, and I think it would look good in black and white also.
TFS
Hi Kookai,
"Is photography" was right so I did some editing on the photo. I extended the background more to the left and retouched the left foot of the chair that has been cropped. Hope you liked it. Cheers for your nice and interesting photo. I have done a workshop for you to see the difference.
Hindi ba sit by me dapat? :) A very minimalist perspective. Great composition!
Just be careful not to crop-out important details.
TFS,
Adrian
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