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Graceful Leap


Graceful Leap
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Copyright: justin burns (jiburns) (11)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-22
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/807 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-23 10:52
Viewed: 513
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
We were at the beach, and she wanted to go down by the water. I picked up her camera right before this scene and fortunately got this amazing shot.
I love it.

This is the original. I just resized it in PS.

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Hi Justin,
welcome on TL. Well done on you first post. I miss saturationa but most of all sharpness (maybe just less fuzinss or grain...) But the composition is great and you caught the action pretty well.
Keep going mate!
Berkut

Welcome to TrekLens!!

Congratulations on nice composition especially in this shot: placement of your subject is very good, and her silhouette against the sky works well.

A slight issue with overexposure of the sun (rising?) and the sky being washed out, and that could be improved perhaps with a gradient of some sort.

Of course, I'm being very picky - you captured a beautiful moment and you captured it well, you should be proud of this shot.

Rew

Welcome to TL
so brilliant movement of girl,seems like a frame from movie
Tfs
best regards
inga

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  • Blish Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 2 N: 2] (232)
  • [2008-02-28 3:42]

it's amazing, i adore it, well done!

Suzy x

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