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The moment I dream


The moment I dream
Photo Information
Copyright: Daryl Davis Apas (dont4get_im) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 17 N: 33] (801)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-18
Categories: Daily Life, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED AF-S DX
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Kids from the World Part V [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-29 7:01
Viewed: 653
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Look at the full set here.

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Hello daryl

Nice portrait. a cute girl and perfect sharpness
but i must admit the forground disturbs me a bit. it take too much place in this pictures I think

TFS anyway

Olivier

Nice portrait. Pretty child
Eyes are very expressive!
Good composition.
Good work.
Congratulations.

good clarity of the picture
and a very expressive eyes
well done! good shot
tfs -mavic

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 428 W: 123 N: 723] (4827)
  • [2007-10-29 8:07]

Hi Daryl,
I've looked at the full set. The crop of that photo is better than this one, because of the things on the foreground. But the eyes and the girl are great!

Janneke

Hi Daril!
Congratulations...!
Un gran trabajo, la expresión de la niña y los colores son perfectos... Y las fotos de la galeria de tu enlace son geniales!
Saludos,
Mical :)

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  • bazsa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 3] (2926)
  • [2007-10-29 8:32]

Hi Daryl,
Great portrait, nice colours and composition, wonderful eyes. Congratulations.
Best Regards. -bazsa

Hi Daryl, this child has beautiful, clear and expressive eyes. A wonderful shot. TFS, Jean

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2007-10-29 11:42]

great Davis! love the composition and sharp eyes. Tfs

oggie

even a sad dream...
i like the reflection of the light in the glance
regards
jo

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  • soda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 174 W: 67 N: 149] (2631)
  • [2007-10-29 13:00]

Hi Daryl,
What a lovely portrait! Great expression and colours,wonderful composition.
Lise

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2142)
  • [2007-10-29 13:27]

Hi Daryl,

Love the photo's on your site!
Still haven't got the nerves to ask people for my photo's.
But looking at yours I want to have them to!

Realy great!!!!

Alex

Two reactions from me

1\The photo and mood: WOW !!! Excellent

2\ What a pitty its half covered left below by that ugly grey ??what is it ?newspaper??

Still..It tells enough of what a fantastic photographer you are Daryl!


John T
* pl

That are not able to us to read everything that these eyes tell us!
Thank you Daryl for this marvelous instantaneous, alain

Que ne pouvons nous pas lire tout ce que ces yeux nous disent!
Merci Daryl pour ce merveilleux instantané, alain

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