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model 4-2


model 4-2
Photo Information
Copyright: cris go (crisgotiny) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 534 W: 0 N: 322] (3665)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-27
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-29 22:21
Viewed: 594
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I got same position shot of this model but simple smile not as radiant as my original post. I just resize it and let all exif data appear. Is this much better shot?

cris(",)
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Hi Cris.
Beautiful model with a black and long hairs.
Nice pose.but the background to much crowded and distracting the image and unsharp.
Cheers Pg.

hi Cris,

A very nice portrait and a pretty model. enjoy shooting..=)

tfs,
Raven

Not bad Cris. Do you have more than one lens for your camera, or just the 17-55mm? A longer lens would give you shallower DOF and eliminate the problem of a busy background. Although that doesn't really bother me, because her dress and skin tone stand out from the background anyway.
Really, the only issue here is motion blur. 1/60s was too slow shutter speed to be hand-held. The best way to deal with this is to change your camera's ISO setting. The Nikon will perform well at ISO 400 or even 800, and it will allow a much faster shutter speed at the same aperture value.
Good luck - keep shooting!
Rew

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 165 N: 1406] (10181)
  • [2007-10-29 23:53]
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Hello again Cris,
This is a lovely portrait of a pretty girl. The lighting is ideal, well done.
Cheers,
Pete.

Hello Cris,
This is a good portrait with a nice model!
You manage to convey her attraction and basically that is what matters, depending on the intended use of the image of course...
She pose well and the image is well done tech wise!
Greetings,
Pablo -

hi cris...
nice shot with natural lighting.
hight light in her hairs look work well.
but for camera setting... mmmm, 1/60s its too slow and your hand look shaking when you shot this, its make your image look blur or shake.
try to use 3pot if you want to use low speed,
and like Rew said... use 400 until 800 ISO to get more highlight in model.
tfs
Haldian

except for the blur, it's a wonderful shot. her exposed shoulder and hairs falling like cascade is like poetry
indrajit

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