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Tiffany Box


Tiffany Box
Photo Information
Copyright: Ruben Mirabel (venz_dt) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 122 W: 2 N: 6] (822)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-29
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D70s, NIKON AF-S 18-200mm 1:3.5-5.6G ED VR
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-10 11:53
Viewed: 408
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this shoot at one of Tiffany & Co. Press Gathering. Adjust the colour little bit and crop it on the right side
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Hi Ruben,

A very good effort, very nice model, good tones.
Issue, cross lighting, two shadows on both sides of the nose, shadow on product, yet the main light is creating a loop effect to Her right of the nose, the viewers left.
Careful with ambient lighting above. This case, camera's flash to the right and bouncing.

Cheers

medyo blown up ng konti pero maganda yung kulay.

Hi Ruben, the pose and pov are nice but I found the washed-out skintones from the bright light to be just a bit harsh. You can tell from the color change on the boxes that the light/flash was quite bright. TFS

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