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• rewshearer (20979)
• [2007-11-12 17:07]

Welcome to TrekLens, Kelly

Thanks for sharing this shot of your friend. In truth, there are probably a number of things that could be improved with this shot - crop, lighting, focus - but it has nice energy.

I'm looking forward to your contributions!
Rew

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• linz (1742)
• [2007-11-12 17:25]

Hi Kelly
Firstly welcome to TrekLens and let me say that this is a great first post. I agree with Rew that the energy in this shot is nice, but you captured a great pose and this picture does have a good feel or mood to it. looking forward to your future posts Thanks for sharing Lindsay.

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• Freddie (6323)
• [2007-11-12 19:16]

Hi Kelly! Welcome to TL! :)
I like her party mood expression and her pose here, saying it's party time! :) I like he crop. You can use hight key saturation to make it more intense, but this is fine also. There is vive here!
TFS and keep posting!
Freddie :)

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• andr3w (125)
• [2007-11-12 19:21]
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Hi Kelly,

I like this action shot of your depicting true movement of your subject. The bent her body creating the diagonal effect I guess made me also like how cropping was done. I believed this has been PP'd using extraction tool right?

Regards and welcome

ANdrew

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• timtim (9598)
• [2007-11-12 19:58]

Welcome to TL
great first pic hope to see more

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• freddd (1909)
• [2007-11-12 21:20]

Nice movement. The flash makes a great effect by creating a halo arround the subject. Seems to be great time and the picture kept it. Good first post. Welcome!

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• gavindya (208)
• [2007-11-12 21:59]

hi Kelly,
very interesting shot with nice movement model,
nice POV and feel full of energy.
tfs
Haldian

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• appalcarp (4188)
• [2007-11-12 22:20]

Hi Kelly, nicely done, lots of verve! The focus is a bit soft and the lighting can use some work as the light is too harsh on the model's face. A diffuser could help with this.

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• darwinr (380)
• [2007-11-13 0:21]

nice model she is beautiful...

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• clonemeout (168)
• [2007-11-13 2:00]
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Hi Kelly
It's nice to come across someone who'e even newer to TL than I am. Welcome! I realy like this picture - it expresses so much energy. Must have been a pretty good party. I wonder, though, was this candid or was she posing? Either way, I look forward to seeing more of your work - and to reading your intro.
cheers
Stephen

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-11-13 6:39]

wonderful portrait shot
lot of action into the picture and a nice pose
maybe u should pose the model in the middle of the frame?