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First Peek


First Peek
Photo Information
Copyright: Stanley Tham (stanleytham) (16)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-26
Categories: Macro
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-28 5:46
Viewed: 929
Points: 6
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This is the common lily that you can find at any pond. What attracted me to this particular bulb is because this is the only bulb among all the leaves. So I took this picture to test whether I can capture it with DOF and i was quite happy with the result. Any comment?
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To trekks: First Peekstanleytham 7 11-30 05:15
To harpya: Hi Stanleyharpya 1 11-30 04:51
To harpya: Thank you Sergiostanleytham 1 11-30 00:13
To Norte: Thank youstanleytham 1 11-29 00:56
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Hi Stanley

Welcome to TL community.

Great to have your interesting photo posted on TL. You are sharing with us how you can photograph subjects, and let us to see more of its interesting features.

You have posted your 1st shot on TL and it is good to share comments with you.
.main subject is best at off center
.focus on water, not sharp on the bud
.good bokeh used
.good reflection included
.good soft light, no shadow

As I find your original post is well captured photo, it is worthwhile to do a workshop to see how it turns out in another perspective view. The link below will provide you what I have done to it

workshop version click here


It is always good for you to have fun this way:
.Post a photo that you think is your best selection, with PP or not
.Write a GOOD NOTE, not just a simple line, to let us appreciate the photo
.After you post, go visit at least 15 sites, comment/critique the shot
.Make use of the ratings and workshops
.It is Useful to read FAQ, Guidelines and ABOUT of TL


TFS, cheers
Bill

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  • Norte Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 7 N: 69] (368)
  • [2007-11-28 15:59]
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Hi and welcome!
I like the color, the nice lily and the background.
It is perhaps too centered, trekks version show us the potential.
TFS
Best regards,
Jon

Hello Stanley

Beautiful visual and composition!
I adored the colors and details.
Beautiful presentation.
Great shot!
Congratulations

Sérgio

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