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masjid jame asr hassanal bolkiah


masjid jame asr hassanal bolkiah
Photo Information
Copyright: Musthaq Raibin (musthaq) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 11 N: 17] (270)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-17
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon 400D Digital, Canon 18-55mm .028m/0.9ft
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-30 17:38
Viewed: 1333
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The gigantic and the magnificent masjid (mosque) Jame Asr’ Hassanal Bolkiah
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To trekks: masjidmusthaq 2 12-01 04:31
To Ananfoto: masjidmusthaq 1 12-01 01:37
To iimanyus: jamemusthaq 1 12-01 00:01
To AJ786: msjidmusthaq 1 11-30 20:19
To meske: masjidmusthaq 1 11-30 20:08
To kulimpapat: masjidmusthaq 1 11-30 20:07
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  • Great 
  • meske (198)
  • [2007-11-30 17:50]
  • [+]

wow,beautiful

Salam Bro

This is nice shots and good framing technique ganya ada singit sikit lah bro tapi kan meluruskan inda ku pandai....congrats

Amri HMS

Hi Musthaq

Great view, symmetry and composition of mosque at night.

Your post is a good night shot at 1/20s, if without tripod, it has surprisingly very little blur but due to ISO1600 it is grainy. Dark shadows is not helping the details and there is low contrast.

I have done a workshop to adjust the above a bit and below is the link to it. I hope you find it useful for comparison purpose.

workshop version, click here

Simply, I crop it a little, remove noise, lighten up to give better details, adjust and frame. Thank you.

Great work, keep shooting.

TFS, cheers
Bill

Hi Musthaq
Great shot of beautiful jami Asri mosque with a great lighting.
I like your composition and framing.
Nice color and sharpness
Well done
Keep it up

  • Great 
  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 57 N: 1045] (6681)
  • [2007-12-01 2:18]
  • [+]

Hi Bro,

Excellent technique work. Great POV and lovely night shot. The only sincere observation is the palcement of the subject. If you were to slightly move the centre of the mosque to the middle assymetrical with the shape of the wall that makes the natural framing and tilting the levelling of horizon, the picture is perfect. But nevertheless, this is surely a superb post my friend.

Keep on posting...

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

Hi Musthaq..

This is the 2nd shot of Jame mosque from this angle that I ever seen. I like the lighting and framing. I agree with Kulimpapat. Good try. TFS.

Salam
OT

Hi Bro..:)
Great shot bro..nice detail and sharpness..>
Well done..>

Salute..>
Anan

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