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Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1871 W: 88 N: 3362] (15946)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-08
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D200, AF-S VR Nikon 70-200mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/640 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Kids from the World [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-12-03 20:36
Viewed: 1120
Points: 118
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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On my way back to hotel, I spotted this kid was alone in the middle of Tiananmen bridge . . I don't see her parent around . .
Very hot day and seems she's very tired walking along the Forbidden city . .
She is really tired as another expression of her on Workshop .

Crop, add frame and resize.

Thank you for viewing it.

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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Regiomontana, angela926, Tomek, eyesthetix, limba3, XOTAELE, PakoJones, Refugee, Silke, JohnTulip, vandana2923, milas, dareco, norenastramus, kokos101, Kiwis, boomcat, jessbalderas, juyona, Ejtaan, shelbeesmom, Fortuna, c_rapp, pablominto, Urfaust, gnada has marked this note useful
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Very good candid shot, Tjutjut....excellent, top quality. The composition, the expression of the child, the way she is sitting, the DOF...all first class! I like this very much, it's a "photographer's photograph" in my view.

Maybe, just maybe, a slightly tighter crop on the right would have worked..

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  • BMYNBR Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 160 W: 1 N: 94] (1131)
  • [2007-12-03 20:54]

Great shot, as said above, really great.
TFS DAve

Poor little guy... Great expression. We can see he was tired and worried. I like the background, and the frame also.

Hello Tjutjut,
Great shot! good composition and colors. Excellent!
Angela

Very sweet shot - beautifully captured! Composition is excellent, the depth of field works well to separate her, and the best part of all is your POV. You've caught this from her level, and as a result the people in the distance are reduced to legs, a child's-eye-view!

Excellent work
Rew

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1461 W: 23 N: 0] (11694)
  • [2007-12-03 22:18]

Hi
Beautiful shot...
Great expression...

Hi Tjutjut,
you have achieved the classic/ideal composition with the subject here !
The child is placed very nicely off-centre (in a most appealing and well balanced way). She is then also looking in the direction of the larger space.. a classic, clever and mature touch :-)

Well done. Best regards, Daniel

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1311 W: 47 N: 2909] (16708)
  • [2007-12-03 22:38]

Hi Tjutjut:)
this photo is just genial in every aspect - Big Regards:)
Tom

Hi Tjutjut:
Excellent capture of this little girl with very real emotions...with outstanding clarity & dof!!!
David

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1081 W: 436 N: 421] (13282)
  • [2007-12-03 23:18]

Hi
Good exposure, DOF and POV
Anna
P.S. WS superbly is supplementing the stage.

great shot, really great

Hello

Nice portrait, great pov, and nice use of dof for this composition

TFS

Olivier

Hola Tjutjut.
Una preciosa fotografía, plena de nitidez y buenos detalles.
Excelente modelo.
Saludos y tfs, JL.

Hi Tjutjut,

Muy buena composición y excelente modelo,.. la calidad de la imagen es extraordinaria , muy buen DOF y perfecta presentación.

Saludos,

Pako

Excellent Tjutjut. I agree with Richard re the crop but the image and DOF are wonderful. TFS,
David

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15586)
  • [2007-12-04 2:11]

very beautiful expression

Cute picture.

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 663 W: 11 N: 1718] (6837)
  • [2007-12-04 3:06]

Tjutjut
What a perfect image. Wow. There is nothing I can add that has not been said, just that I really think this is awesome. Regards
Wanda

Salam Bro

Nice shots and nice compositions....I like the expression of this kid...marvellous

Amri HMS

excellent work.
sorin

wow very cute kid she is very expressive, excellent DOF. The colors are good.

Cris(",)

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2007-12-04 5:03]

Hi Tjutjut
In one word beautiful.
Gr Jos

Hi Tjutjut
Fine photo
Good DOF
Your frames are perfect
do you have a tool for that?
Ruud

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5947] (23588)
  • [2007-12-04 5:39]

Perfect PoV, superb composition, outstanding capture of the mood of the moment. This is very powerful
TFs
silke

Hello Tjutjut,

Freind this is EXCELLENT photo.
Beautiful expressions, color and composition. TFS
John T

Hello Tjutjut,

Lovely portrait of this child - natural and really expressive:)
Great use of DOF, nice soft tones.
Beautiful work!
Regards,
Izabela

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2714 W: 405 N: 2965] (32647)
  • [2007-12-04 6:33]

merhaba myfriend Tjutjut;
verynice shot and pov..bravo...selamlar

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2007-12-04 7:01]

This is very sweet. I like the expression and pose. Great color and lighting. TFS

Hello Tjutjut,
Only one word,marvellous.
Congratulations and thanks.
Greetings
H.Ayhan

hello tjutjut!
excellent shot, wonderful composition, sharpness and great DOF.
i like it.
tfs
zoran

hi tjutjut, nice long lens shot, good depth of field and clarity, he does seem lost! cute kid, well done, thanks scott

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  • Ruut Gold Star Critiquer [C: 254 W: 8 N: 33] (1277)
  • [2007-12-04 13:51]

Hi Tjutjut,
very nice picture due to composition, focus, sharpness on the child and nicely blurred background. A job very well done!
Greets,
Ruut

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 0 N: 189] (13118)
  • [2007-12-04 16:33]

Hi Tjutjut,
Nice expression of this little kid. The composition, DOF and light are great. Great shot.
Regards
Diane

aduuuuh lucunya,
anak siapa nih,
bagus banget ya photonya pasti bukan orang sembarangan nih photographernya hehehehe
apik tenan mas.
oya, hari kamis gimana ? jadi kan ?
saya tunggu konfirmasi jam dan temapatnya ya.
saya sepertinya sama producer saya datengnya ga papa kan ? soalnya abis photosession nih....
thx
Aldhy

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3552 W: 736 N: 2386] (18976)
  • [2007-12-05 1:26]

This is just perfect, my friend !
Congratulations and thanks !!!

v
ps.I'll be back with points

Very nice composition and perspective Tjut!
A cuddle girl :-)

josine

Hello Tjutjut,

Beautiful child photo.
I like the composition here.
Colors are very natural. TFS

Vandana
later

Salam Bro Tjutjut..>
Ahah....pemotretan yang sungguh class bro..dengan penggunaan depth depan dan belakang sungguh baik sekali..teknik yang sama dengan pengambaran "Sang Tupai".kerja yang hebat bro...:

Salute..>
Anan

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 57 N: 1045] (6681)
  • [2007-12-05 5:37]

Hi Bro,

Great shot of this style of street photography. Love the expression indeed and the composition of nobody else around her befits the title well..

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

Hello Tjutjut!

Cute and at the same time sad images ( workshop included ). In both cases , we can see a cop watching these scenes . I prefer this one here, with the legs cut , like we are in a kid's world, seeing only the adults to the waist only like in the old Looney Tunes comics. Emotions well captured.
great composition and prentation .
Bravo!
Robert

Superb shot!!
I like the DOF you used and the composition as well

Regards!!

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2638 W: 1 N: 1261] (15431)
  • [2007-12-06 0:29]

Hola amigo,
precioso trabajo,
magnífico momento y pov.
PERFECTO RETRATO.
simpática escena
saludos Tju
PL

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1083 W: 244 N: 847] (8927)
  • [2007-12-06 0:34]

Hi Tjutjut ,
Excellent candid shot. You captured the girl very well with outstanding clarity and DOF. Blur BG works here very well.
TFS
Lopa

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 970 W: 99 N: 2237] (11265)
  • [2007-12-06 2:38]

A real gorgeous shot Tjutjut. She is absolutely tired and in a way she's looking out for someone. I really like the way you have captured her. The low angle is absolutely great.
Also the colors are great.. they seem a bit taken down... a bit tempered. Very good!

Cheers,
Anneke

Just perfect! Really nice comp! I love the DOF! She is adorable! First class!
B-)
linda

Bonjour,
Cet enfant presque seule au milieu de cette rue, c'est une belle réalisation.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

hello bro Tjutjut,

aku baik saja.. right now in kk panas terik.. weather keep on changing sometime good sometime bad but today is sunny..

i love the expression on this little girl face.. macam nak nangis ja, tired and hot.. tengok lah pipinya yang kemerah-merahan. wonderful capture with lovely detail.

tfs and regards, terry
tunggu :))

Helo Tjutjut,

Fantastic shot, beautiful colors and an excellent frame, as always!
Congratulations!
TFS
Sergio

:) later

Bonjour Tjutjut
Cet enfant a l'air complètement perdu et désemparé, tu as choisi le bon moment
Amicalement
Sylvain

Hi Tjutjut, she is so cute and this iamge is superb. Great colours and very sharp!
Nice other image in the ws. I hope that she was not lost.

Very well done.

Take care, Yan :)

ps: and many thx for the kind words in : "Christmas Lights". I am very pleased that you like it.

Hi Tjutjut,
Make it 100 :-)Excellent capture of this little girl well composted in the view and superb presented. The pose of the adoring little girl is priceless!
Hans

:) Later...

Well this is a great shot!!! The expression, the composition and dof are superb.
Very nice framing.
David

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  • ariw Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 156 W: 30 N: 169] (2202)
  • [2007-12-09 9:54]

Aduh .... ini anak siapa koq ditingal2in, btw this is great capture mas tjutjut, everything is perfect, DOF, expression, moment, etc, thx for sharing, ari

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 957 W: 20 N: 1282] (7282)
  • [2007-12-09 11:22]

A beautifully unposed picture! Great details and a very eye catching pov. Beautifully captured. TFS
Christan

Hello Tjutjut,
This is a fine composition, the frame is packed with emotions!
And life can be so cruel sometimes, hopefully she will reunite with her parents soon...
Point of view on her level works well, DOF spot on isolates the subject well!
Greetings,
Pablo -

:-) OK-

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2230 W: 171 N: 0] (28742)
  • [2007-12-11 5:53]

Hi Tjutjut my friend ;)
excellent simple photo...perfect frame, Congratulations,
Best,
J ;)

great candid shot! nice work well done

tfs!

it's an excellent capture!! great moment.. great expression (so nice also the workshop!!)... great, really!! bravo!!! ;))
ciao Marco

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4762] (21679)
  • [2007-12-27 5:38]

Hi Tjutjut...
Very nice portrait - obviously sweet and cute..!
Top quality... Well done, well presented...
Rgd. George

great photograph.. I am just wandering how do u do these borders??? it looks really great

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