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Critiques [Translate]

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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2008-01-04 14:44]

Interesting portrait (architecture???) to begin with on TrekLens. The lighting creates a mysterious mood, hiding and revealing your young model at the same time. Other mystery: her facial expression, that could have been the expression of an adult, but there is also the teddy bear in her hand, reminding us she still belongs to childhood.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• kaooao (448)
• [2008-01-04 14:53]

Hi

Welcome in TL.
Great Portrait.
Best regards.
Architecture?:)

Mila

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• angela926 (2572)
• [2008-01-04 14:54]

Hello,
very nice portrait of a very lovely little girl, good lighting and sharpness, well done.
Angela

Welcome to TL

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• Suellen_Feroldi (609)
• [2008-01-04 16:26]

Hi there
Wellcome on TL!!!
Congratulations for you first shot!!!
The young model makes your pic very original and sweet, congratulations and TFS,
Have a great day,
Best regards from Brazil



Sue

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• ahdi86 (178)
• [2008-01-04 17:20]

Hi RGF,

Nice portrait, great lightning.
I like her expression. Cute girl.
Nice shot.

TFS,
Cheng

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• eqshannon (1887)
• [2008-01-04 18:43]

Tisa witchy name but still...beyond that you should do some more portrait and studio work..It looks to me lkike it is your thing..good mange
Bob

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• Regiomontana (2740)
• [2008-01-04 20:19]

I will be looking for more of your photos. If this one is the first one, I want to see more. I like the lighting, the little girl pose and the contrast dark/light. TFS

Lorena

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• rminkow (15686)
• [2008-01-04 20:36]

Very nice portrait...great lighting and very nice pose. Great job...

Roger

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• navy (63)
• [2008-01-05 2:10]

HI there,

Welcome to TL. Very nice start - very interesting and mysterious photo.
Well done.
Good luck.

Artur

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• Silke (23590)
• [2008-01-06 2:23]

Welcome to Trek Lens
This is an absolutely stunning picture with which to start your adventure on TrekLens. composition is perfect, colours and details wonderful and mood outstanding!! I hope to see lots more postings from you....

A few tips to make it easier and more fun:
- Add your camera to your introduction (see Profiles, Equipment Profile)
- Each time you post a picture, take the time to visit at least 10 pictures in the Gallery to write a critique of the works of other photographers. Observing (and critiquing) the successes and errors of other members make for great opportunities to learn!
- Make use of the workshop (you’ll learn more about your own strengths and weaknesses by helping others improve)
- Always write more than 4 lines of NOTES. That allows members to give you points for usefulness and gives them a chance to learn more too!
- Take full advantage what TrekLens allows: up to 800 pixels along one on the sides of the picture and up to 200 Kbs file size!
- Read ABOUT (and FAQ)!
I am sure that these ideas will help you make the most of your stay on the site!!

TFS (Thank-you For Sharing)

Silke

:D

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• riems (1677)
• [2008-01-06 6:06]

mooi gebruik van licht, heer, mevrouw RGF oto......... toelichting is overbodig...... oeps...... die staat er ook niet......
:-)
Peter