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• lancegreen (94)
• [2005-04-14 2:21]
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Hi Conrad, great image and intersting POV. I like the grain and the style of focus. I am wondering if the contrast can be upped a touch to improve the texture of the rubble infron of those bulidings. I would imaging that this would have to be done prior to appling the grain, if this was done digitally. You would also have to take care not to completely blow-out the bright white shapes to the left of the image. To do this your could select the shaped with a wand and carefully overlay with a darker shade of grey and adjust according to the amount of contrast to throw in. Great shot all the same, no doubt you have more of the same subject - must have been a really interesting place to visit. I hope this helps. Take care, Lance

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• ckent (0)
• [2005-04-14 2:58]

this photograph is very beautiful by its pov, its light and the grain
mood is not stripped of hope with spot light
I like it very much
CK

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• markgong (448)
• [2005-04-14 3:30]
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Good shot and well seen. I like the tilted compostion and tone of the photo. It reminds me a great deal of something from China Obscura

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• ciore (2309)
• [2005-04-14 3:55]

very like to me.
good to see this image.
well done, good composition. really

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• spike1 (4321)
• [2005-06-01 6:57]

Nice composition, and I like the effect of the grain, Conrad - well done.

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• wayne (0)
• [2005-06-01 10:02]

exceptional documentary photo. the textures and lighting are phenomenal. composition fantastic with the figure in the foreground. i wish the picture was bigger though. well done hope to see more like this.