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"Sevda" #1


Photo Information
Copyright: Seref Bilgi (sbilgi) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 342 W: 51 N: 28] (5080)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05-24
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Pentax Optio 330GS, Digital JPEG
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-04-16 17:30
Viewed: 579
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Her name is "Sevda"."Sevda" meaning in Turkish language is "love" or "passion".She is my friend's daughter.
Tech.
1)Clean back ground.
2)Sharpen two steps.
3)Cropped.
4)Editted NeatImage.
5)Add border/frame.

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  • Klaud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 107 W: 5 N: 124] (1762)
  • [2005-04-16 20:26]

Pretty nice shot except for a few thing.
Mat be it's the camera, but the focus is way too soft, at least the eyes should be sharper. The cropping is too much ( back of the head) or not enough if you want tight cropping.

Watch out for neat image, if not ajusted properly, it soften the image too much. I thing I do with it sometime, is to use it BEFORE unsharping and compare it when to sharpen before it. Big difference it does depending of the noise of the picture. Use the lower ISO setting if you can.

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