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these eyes


these eyes
Photo Information
Copyright: Adam Tymetz (freechechnya1) Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 18] (170)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-02-06
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon Digital Rebel XTi 400D, Canon EF-S 18-55 f3.5-5.6 II, Canon 58mm UV Haze
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): FAVORITE b/w portraits, A Beautiful Child II [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-25 9:19
Viewed: 600
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 15
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Child in Cafezal Favela.

So maybe I regret the cropped ear. But those eyes speak so loudly. I´ve learnt alot since I travled to Brasil and I hope that will start to show when I travel through Peru at the end of Febuary.
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Hi Adam
great portrait, i like b/w portraits, this eyes are most beautiful what i saw..., excellent mood...
regards Magda

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  • Hauke Gold Star Critiquer [C: 242 W: 17 N: 17] (190)
  • [2008-01-25 12:27]

Forget 'bout the cropped ear Adam; that's the way it becomes a great journalistic one. These eyes are fantastic, the look itself tells a wohle story of a hard life and things we do not want to see, of the daily fight of survival...

Great job!
H.:)

I think a crop from the right side would improve your nice photo, because the white area disturbs. Also the white on the nose and the hair is too much burnt.

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1166 W: 2 N: 845] (10703)
  • [2008-01-25 13:40]

Hello Adam.
A touching portrait... and real!
TFS.
Nivaldo

Adam
His eyes make this photo.
I wonder what is he thinking?
The crop in the workshop works well.
Jim

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5773 W: 198 N: 2598] (10192)
  • [2008-01-31 4:06]

Hello Adam

Beautiful capture, I see that he had good moments in Brazil!
he can see the two sides of this country.
One that you see in news sections and other for their own eyes.
Beautiful capture and visual!
You made very good use of B/W.
Congratulations

Sérgio

i think, your photo is better than workshops.
then i am looking at his eyes it seems to me that the time stopped..
thrilling photo:)..

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  • karl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 145 W: 43 N: 41] (726)
  • [2008-03-22 15:32]

an image says more than 1000 words.

You've captured a magic moment

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