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Rapids
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Copyright: Josh Crozier (Humanist) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 39 N: 74] (501)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-27
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 400D/Rebel XTi, Canon EFS 18-55mm f3.5-5.6, 55mm HOYA UV
Exposure: f/8
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-01 9:21
Viewed: 618
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was a bulb exposure of around two minutes shot from a tripod with the mirror locked. I shot just before dawn. The colours were initially almost completely gone and I spent quite a while trying to restore a realistic green to the trees.

I'd be interested in critiques or workshops regarding the colour or hearing whether I should just go to black and white. Other critcism is always welcome too.

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To Donnie: reworkingHumanist 4 02-01 11:19
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Hi Josh!
Superb long exposure and composition. In my own opinion, converting it to B&W is the way to go considering the high contrast of the textures between the foliage/trees and the soft flowing water of the river... anyway, its just my 2 cents worth on the subject :)

Overall... congrats to a superb capture.

-Ian

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  • albay Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 0 N: 4] (121)
  • [2008-02-01 9:33]

very nice shot.....

Beautiful perspective and colors!

I don't specialize in Water photography but I sure do like it and like trying to get that perfect silky effect. It's all about the Time of day, lighting condition and filters used, but it's obvious you know this.
Where you have the snow which is difficult within it's self to get good exposure without over exposing you handled this really well. The shutterspeed on the water is a little more white or lighter than I prefer but that's just me, with that said, I think you have handled this wonderfully, not to mention that it's a beautiful place.
I'm New here and I have no idea how to try and Rework this for you or tell you without actually doing it, but I think I may be able to do a little PS work to tone down the water and bring out the detail though out and maybe even spruce up the color in the everygreen trees, let me stree, I MAY be able too, and then again I may not be able too.
How would I rework this and let you see what I did to it?

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  • mpr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 143 W: 10 N: 309] (2118)
  • [2008-02-01 10:20]

Hi Josh

I'm a big fan of long exposures. You did pretty well containing the exposure and keeping everything controlled without clipping highlights. A little more saturation to trees would really help this photo stand out.

TFS
Mike

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  • aperis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 5 N: 30] (1063)
  • [2008-02-01 10:46]

Hi Josh,
Good work.
Amadeu

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