Dark Lips III

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• zto (262)
• [2004-04-05 14:09]
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Good that you decided to give up on teh soft look Alfredo. Defenatly the wrong model for that. She may be beautifull but not soft ;) This is a bit softer look that on the previous pictures though but you can still see that this is a strong woman.

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• Catcher (370)
• [2004-04-05 16:42]
• [3] - [workshop] [compare]

Certainly a softer and fragile look from the model on this one! Maybe more romantic because you caught her thinking and her expression is sweet and warm, o also like the way she touch on her face close to the ear, definitively this is my favourite of the three photos! I made a workshop in order to have a close up of the model and so tool the white part of the picture out! Hope you like it

Well done

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• Martalgf (68)
• [2004-04-05 21:15]
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• raytheron (146)
• [2004-04-05 22:45]
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Yes, Alfredo, you will battle to get fragility from this model! :) But what you did really works well -- I especially like the large blank expanse; it isolates the model, something enhanced by her looking out of the frame. This is an image that says more every time I look at it!

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• dsidwell (1183)
• [2004-04-06 1:21]
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I really enjoy the thoughtful pose here. I'm not sure it speaks "fragile" to me, but it is certainly softer. I love your tones once again, and the negative space here works well.

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• greg (21)
• [2004-04-06 13:49]
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I like your framing very much, but I wish you'd found your fragility!

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• iamxa (179)
• [2004-06-14 12:13]
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Que gran serie has colocado aqui !!!

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• Arusem (11)
• [2004-11-02 14:47]
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Works well even pulled back a little bit.

Again, very nice composition and great lighting.

The detail in the fabric she has on is very well presented.

Looks fantastic in B&W.

All the best.

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• lisagtaylor (1067)
• [2004-11-12 7:52]
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this photo is very wonderful...the fragility shows it all... and it would be a marvellous photo for a brandmark... like Gap, or Liz Clairbone...
i made me think about an advert made years ago with model Niki Taylor for Clairbone... she looked like this....
your model is highly photogenic... BRAVO !

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• afoni (1699)
• [2005-02-12 12:56]

Excellent!.....

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• agrimace (260)
• [2005-03-05 12:42]

I also like the wide open space and the pose that the model is taking.

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• TonyFoto (3734)
• [2005-07-30 8:51]

Hi Alfredo,
I love the unusual composition and background.
Excellent shot!
Tony

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• Doucez (199)
• [2006-01-17 15:44]

So beautiful! She reminds me some-what of Famke Janssen.

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• HIMself (3574)
• [2006-02-01 16:13]

Great next photo, nice pleasure and withe, good light ! regards

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• exenta (0)
• [2006-07-17 18:17]

Buen retrato,original y sensual.
Saludos