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Girl with Ball


Girl with Ball
Photo Information
Copyright: Misha Mamontov (Mamont) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 1] (33)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-06
Categories: Humorous, Friends/Family, Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-03 11:36
Viewed: 470
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The girl was introduced to the ball for the first time. It was fun to watch her playing with it. On the picture, she is already tired and expecting the ball to come to her.
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To claireneillands: how it was doneMamont 1 02-04 13:33
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I like to know more about how you created this effect with black and white... it's a great shot... well done...

Composition interessante. J'aurais peut etre placé la fillette juste un peu moins a l'extreme haut-gauche. Couleur selective interessante aussi. Salutation, Jean.

very well presented the lead lines to the girl are very good

tfs
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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1571 W: 126 N: 2228] (20439)
  • [2008-02-08 12:33]

Hello Misha, that's a very good composition with a very good technique, thanks!

Mario

very nice capture - great sharpness and
a very interesting POV
beautiful diagonal line
even without the color effect it wld hve made a
great picture imho...
regards
bart

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  • thor68 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 117 N: 762] (4536)
  • [2008-02-15 10:39]

terrific idea, i really like the desaturation keeping only the ball colored. this creates a wonderful effect and puts the
emphasis on the wall. the child of course adds a lot of points to the "cuteness factor". the composition is great with the
girl in one corner and the ball diagonally on the opposite side, and of course the different lines in the front
and in the back leading the view. well done & best wishes, thor.

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