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Clouds Afloat


Clouds Afloat
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Copyright: Subashini Sivadevan (subs) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 0 N: 222] (2080)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-26
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Reflections [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-02-06 6:13
Viewed: 582
Points: 15
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Subashini,
You had a nice POV for the shot, but the horizon is tilted and the reflection does not have enough contrast. I prepared a workshop for you, but notice later that you do not allow it for your pictures.
If you change your settings, I will be glad to post it for you.
Cheers,
Wellington

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2008-02-06 15:49]

Hi Subashini,
Beautiful setting and composition, but few things could be improved. As the previous comment said, you have to get the horizon horizontal always. It is a cardinal rule in landscape photography, unless of course you wanted a tilted picture, but those never work with landscapes. The picture is a bit too bright, so some adjustments of the brightness/contrast is called for here. You have a very good sense of compositons and colour, so keep it up.

Hi Subashini,
Great landscape and beautiful reflections in this photo !! Compo and colors are very good too. And yes, the horizon should be straight. ;-)
greetings,
Joop!

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  • ved Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 95 W: 16 N: 12] (626)
  • [2008-02-13 0:53]

Nice reflections, with a very pleasing scenery.
Good composition. The nature's soft colors have come quite well.
TFS
Ved

great effect subs, well capture and framed, a bit tilted on the left side, but a nice capture indeed

Hello Subs,
What exquisite colour of the water--so totally tropical!
Nice capture.
Take care, joni

Hi Suba,
Beautiful setting and composition.
You had a nice POV for the shot
Colors are great
Well done
Bye

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  • cycle Gold Star Critiquer [C: 228 W: 0 N: 3] (1851)
  • [2009-01-20 12:18]

Great landspace and beautiful reflections...
Regards

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