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Critiques [Translate]
- zen79
(384) - [2008-02-20 8:57]
What amazing picture... I like the colour, your use of light and the composition. I only would put the girl a little more to the left. Thank you for share...
- The-Turtle
(217) - [2008-02-20 10:12]
Hello Shimmy :-)
Your picture is beautiful. I really like the coulor and the composition. It's a good job ;-)
The Turtle
- seethingsclear
(821) - [2008-02-20 10:43]
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Hi Shimmy
Beautiful subject and colours.
I think it could be more effective framed diferently and if it was larger than that.
I made a workshop ,I hope you don't mind.
TFS
Yassine
- Aagreen
(89) - [2008-02-20 10:49]
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I love it but I would have lost the mat underneath her, it takes all the atention out of the composition.
Aaron
- rewshearer
(21123) - [2008-02-20 11:45]
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Hello Shimmy,
A dramatic setting and a stunning model; I love her posture . . .
I am uploading a workshop for an additional crop and presentation; hope you don't mind . . .
All the best,
Karen
Hi Shimmy...I like the picture but have two comments...first to make it larger on the site, use 250 kb instead of 200..then decrease by 5% until it uploads..you will be able to increase the size.
Second I would crop...I have done a workshop for you...by cropping you can create a bit of drama in the shot.
Good luck.
Roger
simply excellent
Karl
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She's a lovely dancer but I think this shot could have better composition, and better placement of subject.
Also - if you write a note I will be happy to give points.
Rew