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flamenco 3


flamenco 3
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Copyright: Shimmy Benvenisty (shimmy) (43)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-29
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-20 8:35
Viewed: 590
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
picture was taken in romans ruins of Kesaria...
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  • zen79 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 4 N: 8] (384)
  • [2008-02-20 8:57]

What amazing picture... I like the colour, your use of light and the composition. I only would put the girl a little more to the left. Thank you for share...

Hello Shimmy :-)
Your picture is beautiful. I really like the coulor and the composition. It's a good job ;-)

The Turtle

Hi Shimmy
Beautiful subject and colours.
I think it could be more effective framed diferently and if it was larger than that.
I made a workshop ,I hope you don't mind.
TFS
Yassine

I love it but I would have lost the mat underneath her, it takes all the atention out of the composition.

Aaron

She's a lovely dancer but I think this shot could have better composition, and better placement of subject.

Also - if you write a note I will be happy to give points.

Rew

Hello Shimmy,
A dramatic setting and a stunning model; I love her posture . . .
I am uploading a workshop for an additional crop and presentation; hope you don't mind . . .
All the best,
Karen

Hi Shimmy...I like the picture but have two comments...first to make it larger on the site, use 250 kb instead of 200..then decrease by 5% until it uploads..you will be able to increase the size.

Second I would crop...I have done a workshop for you...by cropping you can create a bit of drama in the shot.

Good luck.

Roger

simply excellent
Karl

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