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Fighting yourself


Fighting yourself
Photo Information
Copyright: diede Verdouw (diede) (216)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-20
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-02-20 9:51
Viewed: 396
Points: 8
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Hi!
I was making pictures with my sister, and we were doing that on a old train rail, and this is one result,
This hand is also the girl in the front, thats why i called it: Fighting yourself...
I hope you like it.
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To kasias: Thanks!diede 1 02-21 22:35
To Jan: Bedankt!diede 1 02-21 09:31
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cool photograph but in the colour in my opinion a bit lost...

Hoi Diede, mooi gedaan!! Je hebt er een verhaal van gemaakt, echt goed!!
Ik heb een WS gemaakt om te laten zien hoe het is als je de kleuren verandert...
Kijk maar eens.
Je hebt mooi werk geleverd!!

Janneke

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  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 98 W: 2 N: 40] (1131)
  • [2008-04-22 4:39]

Magnificent POV and perpective Diede.
Colors are wonderful.
I like the film atmosphere your shot has.
Very well seen Bravo
best regards Argyris

diede,
I like the point of view (POV) of this shot. Very creative and fresh.
Very good placement of the subjects. The only thing I would have done differently is to keep the sky from washing out with a circular polarizer filter on the lens and I might have taken two photos. One just like this and one with the fist totally in focus and the background girl a bit out of focus. (different depth of field DOF).
I think you did pretty well with this shot and you get full marks from me! Good job!
Scott

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