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Asparagus Hunting


Asparagus Hunting
Photo Information
Copyright: Yukiko Aramaki (violetteddy) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 54 W: 4 N: 26] (269)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-05
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus Camedia C-2100 UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Teddy and Pencil [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-02-24 5:35
Viewed: 592
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One afternoon, I decided to take my teddy bears out for photographing. I couldn't get inspired most of the way, then I came across this olive grove where so many different kind of wildflowers were flowering.

First I took their photos against an old olive tree, but it wasn't interesting at all. So I gathered some wild asparagus growing nearby, and let Teddy to carry them.

Processing the photo on my computer later, I wondered whether I should have let Pencil (the little red teddy bear) to hold one end of asparagus and Teddy (the brown bigger bear) to hold the other end... It might have been better.

Well, it's a bit too late now.

PP work
* Colour and level adjusted
* Blur added to the tree area
* Cropped and framed
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this is a very creative shot. i like it alot.
its original and very detailed excellent work

Just great again!
TFS
Cynthia

Another great shot of the continuing adventure....
Lovely DOF work here, great color,
and wonderful composition.
Well done.
- Vincent

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1412 W: 130 N: 3837] (15946)
  • [2008-02-24 7:35]

I LOVE this! I am so happy to see your bears back on TL.. perfect idea.. Love the added asparagus.. hope you took it home to cook!

wonderful colors....

Tricia

Ah, mes deux stars préférées :-) C'est superbe, printanier à souhait, avec une jolie touche de poésie. Merci du partage.
Antoine.

Cool your two friends
Beautiful photos
Beautiful idea
Best Regards
Emanuele.

Bonjour,
Bonne idée de mise en scène.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 663 W: 11 N: 1718] (6837)
  • [2008-02-27 4:29]

No Yukiko, I would not change a thing. You have this so that it really looks like they are walking and about to take the next step. You convey a nice fun and happy mood. I just love it. Excellent presentation.
Regards
Wanda

SO lovely dream for my eyes !
I love this composition. I have a Teddy Bear me too.
Nice result and good focus and contrasts.

Very ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ photo.

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