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shine
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Copyright: Ildiko es Gyula (jazmin) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1011 W: 63 N: 323] (6965)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-01-22
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.7, 1/20 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-03-06 8:10
Viewed: 298
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
of mercy state

shine became permanent, my faculties
I spread it resigned,
my sentences break up before my eye
words and decrepitate letters,
the erosion of my consciousness with a hand receivable,
I feel it the ruthless,
the touch of everlasting will,
my resistance weakens, I would address you,
if my language would obey
my inarticulate paryer echos the
whitewashed between walls

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kegyelmi állapot

állandósult ragyogás, karjaimat
megadóan tárom szét,
mondataim a szemem előtt töredeznek
szavakká s mállanak betűkké,
tudatom eróziója kézzel fogható,
érzem a kíméletlen,
örökkévaló akarat érintését,
ellenállásom gyengül, megszólítanálak,
ha nyelvem engedelmeskedne
artikulálatlan imádságom visszhangzik a
meszelt falak között
gnada, bizsu, MagdalenaN, chrisJ, zhelach, degani, tanburi, Teresat, vandana2923, tibig, Black_Dog, ayse51, Vaibhav27 has marked this note useful
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Hello Ildiko,
Beautiful photo. The light on the steps is superb, as the compo. Great POV, and an excellent capture.
My regards, jmb

Hi Ildiko,
Like another world!!..Fantastic shot.
Perfect perspectve and depth. Tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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  • bizsu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 217 W: 0 N: 112] (1411)
  • [2008-03-06 10:56]

Szia Ildikó !
Látom nem akarsz kibújni a falak mögül ! Érdekes , és egyszerű kép. A fények mégis úgy felemelik, mintha a menyországba lépdelne az emberfia. Gratulálok a vershez is , nagyon szép.
Szió, Zsú

Hi Ildiko

Good POV, like the light on the steps but did not notice this at first as the light from the window is very bright. Hope you are not offended but I have done a workshop.

Regards Derek

Hello Ildiko
excellent POV, great idea, interesting mood...
all the best friend
Magda

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  • germma Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1057 W: 38 N: 1052] (9750)
  • [2008-03-06 14:12]

Interesting and unusualy
shoot Ildiko, nice work!

Igor

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4194 W: 222 N: 3837] (28105)
  • [2008-03-06 16:52]

Hi Ildiko

I like the upward pov & low shooting angle, as well as the backlighting reflections on the tip of each stair. Tfs!

Hello Jazmin!
Good composition! Nice lights and details! Interesting note! Bravo!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

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  • degani Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 173 W: 0 N: 249] (2218)
  • [2008-03-06 22:26]

hi Ildiko,
this picture has a very great perspective, I like the orizontal lines of the steps and the light at top, very evocative, brava
kind regards
franco

Hello Ildiko,
Wonderful light and shadow game my friend. What can I say other than "excellent".
TFS
Selahattin E

Great beautiful photo. I love it. The light is grat and the atmosphere superb. ThanKs Ildico

have anice WE

My regards

teresat

Hello Ildiko,
Looking at this photo I remember the movie "Ghost".
As if I'm looking at the steps to go to heaven.
Very nice POV. TFS
Vandana

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 654 W: 26 N: 644] (7205)
  • [2008-03-07 7:50]

Ugyes kep, jol illik hozza a versike. Es meg egy olyan misztika ellenes alaknak mint jomagam is van mit atadjon.
Koszi,
Tibi

Howdy Ildiko!
Very original minimalistic picture. Stairway to Heaven! Wonderful geometry. Good POV. Fantastic lightness!

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1059 W: 56 N: 687] (11195)
  • [2008-03-09 0:30]

Hi İldiko,
good perspective and beautiful light.WEll done my friend.TFS.Necla.:)later.

Hi Ildiko,
Good shot from that angle,
Nice idia,
good composition,
Cheers!!
TFS....

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2217 W: 59 N: 2480] (13921)
  • [2008-03-24 6:08]

Hi Ildiko...
I love the composition, nice details and colors.
Wonderful job with perfect light and contrast!
Well done,
George

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