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My pink room


My pink room
Photo Information
Copyright: francesco De Florio (deffra) (65)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1991-07
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-06 14:34
Viewed: 718
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Mon séjour en Algérie
(picture scanned from a slide taked in 1991)
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Francesco

Interesting emphasis on the colour. There are however a few problems with this shot. Firstly, it is rather overexposed. One should be very careful with windows in photographs, as often they tend to introduce too much light into the picture. An option would have been to use a powerful flash in order to solve the problem.

The second (much more severe) issue is that the photo lacks a point of focus. The part of the cupboard on the left hand side is distracting and their seems to be no main subject in the photo to which the eye is drawn.

Next time try to find a strong subject and place it such a position that it complies with the rule of thirds.

Happy snapping & keep trying.

TFS.

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