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dancer 01


dancer 01
Photo Information
Copyright: Rafael Happke (zeus) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 54 W: 5 N: 8] (287)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04
Categories: Event
Camera: Canon EOS 50, Sigma 70-200mm 2.8
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-04-25 16:47
Viewed: 705
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
the girl during a presentation of her number on the 13 de Maio Theater, in Santa Maria, RS, Brazil.

scanned from the negative, some colors adjustments, net image to reduce grain.
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that a very nice photo. I like the light that is falling on the dancer, and you cought a nice pose. but I think if you would of croped most of the blackness so the dancer apears larger in the frame. otherwise its a very nice picture.

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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2005-04-25 17:06]

Very well composed, although I agree a little less black would have added more impact. Still, great shot and TFS. Tim

Nice pose, Good catch here. I do like all the negative space here. I think it adds to the feeling that there is alot of movement going on here. I think that since the subject is facing the right that it might look better if more of the negetive space was on the right instead of the left. Think I'll do a workshop to see if it makes a difference. Anyway, I like this picture.

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  • ish Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 26 W: 25 N: 13] (194)
  • [2005-04-25 20:19]

nice spot light effect,i agree with the workshop the should have been a bit to the left

Hello Rafael,
Very beatiful picture.. You took it at a great moment..
You ve numbered it "01".. I d like to see others..
Congrats..

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3274 W: 268 N: 7772] (33174)
  • [2005-04-26 4:19]

Nicely captured shot Rafael, with the dancer centred under the light. Excellent back ground. Well done.

Great shot of this ballerina taking centre stage. The lighting has been captured well. Very nice work.

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  • WIN Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 133 W: 12 N: 64] (1510)
  • [2005-08-20 10:36]

Thats great shot!
I like her pose and this dark background.
Well done. Take care,

Lukas.

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