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Hot Horses
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Copyright: Rob de Jong (Viking) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-19
Categories: Nature, Transportation
Camera: Canon Digital Rebel XT 350D, Sigma 18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 DC Digital OS, Hoya UV
Exposure: f/13.0, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-25 11:01
Viewed: 508
Points: 72
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Barcelona , horses in the hot September sun

This close up I made out of compassion.
Tourists use this way of transport all day,
I could not help feeling a little sorry for this Horse
(and others)

Photo taken near the Ramblas in Barcelona

Take care all

Rob

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3104 W: 253 N: 5654] (21142)
  • [2008-03-25 11:10]

Th tight composition of this really lets us see how poorly cared for the horse is with flies plaguing it. The low-hung head really adds to the feeling.
Excellent capture
TFS
silke

Hoi Rob,
Lovely composition and horse portrait.
Beautiful colours and frame.Well done.TFS.
Greetings
H.Ayhan

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3172 W: 359 N: 2595] (11209)
  • [2008-03-25 12:03]

Mmm... I don't know about this one, Rob. I can understand why you wanted to present a close-up, but I think it is way too closely cropped: the eye-patch is almost glued to the left edge, the lips are missing, no ears at all... imo those are important body language indicators, and hence important to convey the message you wanted to pass to us...
Just my 2 cents, of course ;o)
TFS

Hello Rob, very nice portrait of this poor horse. Yes a great compassion for him.
Nice colours and control of light and good note.

Cheers, Yan :)

Hi Rob, a great one man..
Razor sharp.. you must have had your reasons to close in like this
One reason I can think of.. the tormented face of the horse due to Sun and these buggers ' flies' ?!
Excellent PP to.
I like it very much!
Greetings
John

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 707 W: 0 N: 1044] (4406)
  • [2008-03-25 13:00]

HI Rob
This photo sends a strong message of abuse and negligence.
Its a good thing you photographed so close as I am sure the ears were in bad condition, and the teeth probably worn out. The head hanging down, he looks like a broken horse resigned to his fate.
Good shot but sad to look at.
Dot

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2895 W: 527 N: 3087] (13806)
  • [2008-03-25 13:10]

Hi Rob,
Yes, we can expect that this horse is not happy!
The tight crop is a little too strong, IMO! But, what we see, is well clear and defined.
Bravo! Annie

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  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 56 N: 1205] (4597)
  • [2008-03-25 14:10]

Hi Rob
A new shot from your hand.
Great composition, superb sharpness, and a good close up of flies from Barcelona.
Best greetings from Denmark and
Jens.

Hello Rob,
As far as the details goes, very nicely captured. At the same time, I would like to see complete face.
Yes, he does look sad :-(
May be he need some attention and more care. TFS
Vandana

Nice closeup, very sharp details and excellent light, but I'm afraid I'd have to go with Dingo's opinion...the image is cropped too much...you should've included the whole head of the horse. Nevertheless, great job!
TFS!
Diana

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 674 W: 34 N: 1425] (8723)
  • [2008-03-25 16:43]

Hi Rob,
A nice close up shot of this poor fella. Beautiful animal well captured. TFS Julie

Hi Rob,
What a great portrait..Good light and details.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1458 W: 0 N: 164] (10972)
  • [2008-03-26 2:32]

Hi Rob,
A journalist shot and the excellente note explicative to go with it. We feel sorry for the horse and his friend. Thanks, that's the reallity.
Regards
Diane

Hi Rob,

Very well composed eventhough it's tight . .
Nicely framed . .

Tfs,
TJutjut

:-)) will be back this afternoon

Hi Rob,

Excellent capture of the poor horse working in such conditions. Despite of the big crop as the other also said, the picture looks very good, you captured beautiful colours, light, and clear details. TFS

Best regards,
Sorina

Hi Rob
Nice closeup of that horse.He looks tired indeed on a hot day. I can see flies ont his face. The tiring mood is well captures dans the details are sharp.
Nicely done
Serge

Hi Rob,

I can share that feeling with you just by looking at this picture, seeing how he is holding his head and the flies - terrible.
Hope the over all impression was that he was cared for by his owner!

TFS
Els
:)

Hoi Robby
Mooi joh, een gevoelig gegeven
Compliment voor jou. Die vliegen, gadver, je zal maar zo staan de hele tijd.
Doei Rob, groetjes aan de meisjes :-)

Joos

Poor horse, yeah, I feel sorry for it too. Sometimes they have to stand around for a long time being bothered by flies. I guess the tail can't reach the muzzle to shoo them away.
Cheers
Otto

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1581 W: 0 N: 1] (10073)
  • [2008-03-29 3:29]

Mooi hoofd Rob.
Mooie beeldvulling.
Gr Jos
P**

So sad feeling but great details almost has an Eeyore quality to it. Very nicely presented. TFS
Christan

Doet me aan mijn opoe denken .... die vliegen. ;-)
Mooi portretje. Een vriendin van je?
Goed van kleur.
groeten,
Joop!

You managed to capture the tiredness on it,s face very well.

Thanks for your comment on "in the winter"

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 37 N: 604] (3827)
  • [2008-04-03 2:19]

Hi Rob
Indeed it looks neglected an overworked and your capture brings out this feeling of compassion it creates
TFS
Argiris

Hi Rob,
the necessitous horse looks a little tired, it is nice sharp captured.
Best regards.
Evangelos

I love the textures on this Rob! Nice details, poor guy looks really tired and hot! Very western! I like it!
B-) B-)
Linda

Excellent crop Rob. Good colour and fine detail. I would say looking at the horse's colouring it is nearng retirement, let us hope that those years at least are comforting. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Tamar Tides V’ and ‘Autumn in the City’

Hello Rob,
A worthy and revealing portrait of what is clearly not a very happy, or well cared for animal. I assume that you have cropped the original image to produce the unusual format used here. This cropping certainly adds to the edgy, hopeless and oppressive atmosphere of the picture but does very little for it from a technical point of view. To me this is absolutely appropriate and acceptable.
Good work!
Best wishes
Bill

ciao Rob.. the crop is really effective..
i like your frame.. and all these details..
light is really superb!! bravo
thanks
ciao Marco

Rob


hermoso perfecto ejemplar te felicito

Hi Rob,

I like the tight composition, which makes us focus on the horses tired look and the very good sharpness and detail.
Well done my friend,
Take care,
Vassilis

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  • Nikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 340 W: 2 N: 82] (1702)
  • [2008-04-20 13:18]

Hi!

Good picture, wonderful frame and colours!

TFS
ANa

Hello Rob :)

Excellent capture, great tight crop. Poor horse, i can believe its hard work. Lovely colours and good frame, bravo !
Greetings
Marylou

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1373 W: 12 N: 608] (8957)
  • [2008-04-21 15:02]

Hi Rob,
Great close up. I like the way you cropped the picture. Lot of details and sharpness. Well done.
Sunil

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 90 W: 0 N: 54] (1042)
  • [2008-04-22 12:53]

Hi Rob,
Excellent capture!
Beautiful frame !
I love it !
Jasmine

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3173 W: 67 N: 2295] (16383)
  • [2008-05-01 12:54]

Hallo Rob.
Barcelona en Vliegen ? tis nie meer wat het geweest is.!
Ik denk dat je grote vriend John, als paarden liefhebber, zal zeggen dat je die vliegen er effe moet uitclonen, toch ?
Zal effe kijken OF hij dat gezegd heeft.
Groeten van Jan
ps.
Nee dus.
Jammer heb ik weer geen green smile-tje voor je.
Volgende beer beter.
Jan

Merhaba Dear Friend Rob,
Wonderful horse portrait!!Very beautiful details and frame.Congrats!!!
Greetings from Istanbul,
Deniz:)

Hai Rob,
Mooie close up van dit paardenhoofd,
Al die vliegen komt zeker door de warmte,
Gr, Jacqueline

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