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Copyright: edoardo man (josefK) (20)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-06-02
Exposure: f/2.9, 1 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-03-27 15:47
Viewed: 667
Points: 10
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My home in Bologna ( Italy )


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hello
this is a very good black and white night photo!
i like the curved road which is highlighted by the lights of the cars

nice use of b/w.
interesting lights on the road.
you have done well.
Brian

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2008-03-27 16:24]

Good angle here, I like the nocturnal urban feeling and the shadows of the passing vehicles, as well as the parked bikes. Proof that you don't need technical perfection to make a great shot.
cheers,
Cristian

Though the picture is unsharp, it is quite eyecatching; the curve, the black and white tones, and the feeling of movement by looking at it.
I really like the rule of thirds used here.

As far as the sharpness goes, possibly try sharpening it once or twice, or even use "unsharpen mask" in Adobe Photoshop 7.0 or any program possibly, if you have it.
Also, there is a slight distraction at the top you could clone or crop out.
Thanks for sharing Edoardo!

Leanne

hello josefk
good shot,
nice black and white effect.
nice perspective and a good angle.

manuj mehta

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