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Softness of the heart


Softness of the heart
Photo Information
Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1871 W: 88 N: 3362] (15946)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-28
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 5D, Canon MP-E 65mm f/2.8
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/15 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Orchid [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-03-29 4:03
Viewed: 592
Points: 83
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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Captured at early morning my office . . just refreshed with a new orchid on previous night . .
Utilizing ambient light from ordinary office lamp . .
Trying different perspective of not showing a clear and sharp image of the orchid . . 1x magnification macro lens . .

It is a core part or the heart of orchid . .
Hope you like the softness of this image . .

No crop, just add frame and resize.

Thank you for viewing it.

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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inaam, dareco, vandana2923, tanburi, Dot, c_rapp, shelbeesmom, harpya, chrisJ, Royaldevon, mvdisco, wieyos, jusninasirun, GreenBaron, Jong, Josine, JohnTulip, juyona, gnada has marked this note useful
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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2008-03-29 4:11]

Hello Tjutjut,

In this image the core of a flower is beautifully captured by you. Lovely idea and fine composition. Excellent presentation, luminosity and point of view. Well done brother.

Thanks for sharing this image.

Hi Tjutjut

Amazing macro. What a beautiful sotfness here. Lovely colors.

Thank you!

- Josée

Hello Tjutjut,

Superb macro shot..
Lovely tones..
All the best, dear friend.

jp

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2008-03-29 4:22]

I like this new perspective. A very beautiful picture! Nice framing. TFS

Hello Tjutjut,
Like the colors here and details inside the orchid heart.
I would like to see a little more sharpness. TFS
Vandana

Hello Tjutjut,
Really this flower looks like a hearth.
Good colors and composition...
Selahattin E

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 31 N: 3045] (12300)
  • [2008-03-29 7:04]

Hi Tjutjut
Beautiful colors, with a lot of softness.
A bit of sharpness might have shown it off a bit more but that is just me talking
TFS
Dot

beautiful colors and very nicely presented. Wonderfully seen and a great pov. TFS
Christan

Excellent Macro creation.

soft but still it adds punch on this kind of shot, the DOF on the middle is pleasing to me.well captured my friend, the softness of the image made the composition stand out.
regards................andres

There is such incredible smoothness to this shot tjutjut! Love the colors here, the softness really draws the eye into the shot!
B-)
lINDA

Hi Tjutjut,
Wonderful macro.Sharp, colours and details are perfect.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

Superb.
A great pov.Amazing colors and focus.
hank for sharing,

Sabina

hi tjutjut, this shot as titled is so soft and delicate, the depth of field,composition, colors and overall design are amazing,
tfs,
scott

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1792 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2008-03-30 1:30]

Hello Tjutjut,

Excellent shot, soft and beautiful, really nice macro, nice vibrant colours and details, good job! :D


Cheers,
Sweety

:) ltr

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2235 W: 172 N: 0] (28820)
  • [2008-03-30 2:05]

Hi Tjutjut dear friend ;)
wonderful artistic POV...TFS
Best regards,
J ;)

You know Tjutjut, I hope you realise that you are a very lucky man - having fresh orchids every week - must be really lovely and I love the picture of its heart. The colours and soft texture here is very attractive.

TFS
Els

Hi Tjutjut,
Very good ambient light,
Best rgards,
Ralf

Hai Tjutjut,
Beautiful macro off this orchid,
Like the softness and the color,
Gr, Jacqueline

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 57 N: 1045] (6681)
  • [2008-03-30 6:17]

Hi Bang

Nice DOF and POV on the flower. Well shot and presented too.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

Hello my friend...


Great close-up of this center of this orchid!
I am always amazed with the beauty here.
fine composition. Excellent presentation.
Congratulations Tjutjut

Sérgio

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4225 W: 414 N: 6642] (42045)
  • [2008-03-30 7:27]

Hi Tjutjut

Fantastically sharp dof on the purple orchid, with superb colour and framing. Terima kasih!

Hello Tjutjut,

Superb macro!
The petals resemble cupped hands keeping the centre safe!
Lovely colours.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Tjutjut,
Beautiful colours here in your composition , nice capture and well presented and lovely details, Very sharp and light picture, great shot my friend,
Michel

Hi Tjut,

not only like the softness of the image, the subject itself is indeed very lovely. national carrier uses this flower as their icon, another nation adopted it as the national flower.

a great shot of an inner part of a flower. well done and a good try.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

saya oke oke aja...cuman sedikit sibuk lagi mengatur pernikahan kemanakan di rumah saya. Makasih.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1487 W: 123 N: 2164] (19797)
  • [2008-03-30 11:59]

Hello Tjutjut, very good composition with a beautiful tight crop on that fine flower, well done, thanks!

Mario

Hi Tjutjut,
Beautiful creative shot...
Nice colours and good detailles.
Figure of flower is like a heart as you know....
Fantastic shot. tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Hello Tjutjut. Very nicely closed composition of this orchid in elegance and softness. A good early morning start with pleasant lighting and very well framed. Regards. Jusni

Great macro, impresive details colors and ligth. TFS

  • Great 
  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 558 W: 40 N: 848] (8422)
  • [2008-03-30 21:48]
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tidak sebagus macro-macro sebelumnya pak. agak terlalu sempit deh dof nya

Yan

mas, bagus nih bunganya, tapi untuk effect blurnya kenapa ya aku rasa terlalu dipaksakan ? seperti blur yang ada di bawah bunga, jadi kelopak bunganya seolah2 menyatu dengankelopak yang lain. juga untuk lighting aku rasa aga over light dibagian atas.

iya nih... ternyata cari model yang mau diphotoaga repot sekarang ya, batasannya maunya seperti gimana mas ? bukan nude kan ? hehehehe

rgd
Aldhy

A great explosion of colours!
Absolutely gorgeous. A superp posting my friend!

Bye
Josine

Hola Tjutjut

Wowww que maravilla de imagen, muy elegante y bien tratada, los colores suaves y nítidos le dan mucha fuerza a esta bella imagen. Muy buen trabajo.

Saludos,

Pako

  • Great 
  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 663 W: 11 N: 1718] (6837)
  • [2008-03-31 3:16]

I do like the softness, Tjutjut. I like the colour and the lines as well. Again it is interesting and unique lovley. I love the light and find the posting perfect for this beautiful flower. Well done.
Warm Regards

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 124 N: 1437] (20268)
  • [2008-03-31 6:34]

Hi Tjutjut,
beautiful coloured flower.Lovely title and composition.TFS.Necla.:)later.

Hi Tjutjut,
To be honest with you there are some anoying elements in this image which makes this picture not as good as I'm used from you. The blurry spots in the centre, the OE area on the top, It's all quite distractive in my opinion. Hope this critique isn't too harsh, I'm looking forward to your next posting I'm sure I will enjoy it :-)
Hans

Hello
splendide macro avec des détails fins
belle lumière douce et j'aime le flou autour
amitiés

jojo

My friend
You have captured one of my favorite flowers and made it look delicate and beautiful.
Great lighting and colors, composition and calarity are on the spot!
thanks for sharing,

John

Hi Tjutjut,
Nice micro shot,
good colours,
Nice tittle,
nicely framed,
good job,
TFS,


Vaibhav.....

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2639 W: 1 N: 1262] (15433)
  • [2008-04-02 2:10]

Hola Tju,
original macro,
colores y composición hermosas.
buen trabajo y pov.
saludos amigo.

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4763] (21687)
  • [2008-04-12 20:12]

Hi Tjutjut...
Great art photo - nice macro... Wonderful composition,
lovely colors and PP work...
Well done.
Best regards,

merhaba my friend tjutjut
excellent macro picture.excellent lovely colours and lovely flower.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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