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Copyright: beetle juice (trampas) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 306 W: 197 N: 906] (7145)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-03-18
Categories: Nature, Transportation, Artwork, Experimental, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: FUJIFINEPIX S5700
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-04-02 1:29
Viewed: 429
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is the next pic of the sparrow on my pals old Fordson tractor.
i will post the original in ws.

converted to sepia.
adjusted curves.
used fibre effect in ps.
added border.

A LITTLE bird, with plumage brown,
Beside my window flutters down,
A moment chirps its little strain,
Then taps upon my window-pane,
And chirps again, and hops along,
To call my notice to its song;
But I work on, nor heed its lay,
Till, in neglect, it flies away.

So birds of peace and hope and love
Come fluttering earthward from above,
To settle on life's window-sills,
And ease our load of earthly ills;
But we, in traffic's rush and din
Too deep engaged to let them in,
With deadened heart and sense plod on,
Nor know our loss till they are gone.



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A very sweet image of this little birdie :) and the sepia gives this a mood of it's own. I like this very much. TFS

LOVE the effect! Excellent result!
TFS, Bri!
Diana

hello BRIAN McDONNELL
nice expreiment with effect
i like it.
nice composition.

regards
manuj mehta

Hello Brian.
I like your PP here. Great mood created. Very original work.
TFS
Wojciech

Bonjour Brian
Belle composition très artistique et traitement réussi!

Amicalement
Sylvain

  • Great 
  • Poraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 51 W: 0 N: 178] (822)
  • [2008-04-02 9:29]

Wonderful effect. Excellent colours and light. Amazing expression.
Greetings
Robert

  • Great 
  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2008-04-02 12:38]

Well seen and interestingly rendered. Good work!
tfs,
Cristian

Hello Brian
great PP work, i like this image, realy original presentation...
hugs
Magda

Original and well done, Brian!
It adds a strange but pleasant mood!
TFS, and also late thanks (forgive me!) for your WS in one of my portraits!
Ciao, Antonella

  • Great 
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5950] (23596)
  • [2008-04-03 10:18]

this is actually a great way to make a silk purse out of a ... ... ...
The final image is powerful -- the helplessness of tiny bird emphasized by the composition
This would make a totally FABulous book cover
TFS
silke

Hi Brian,
Lovely shot,
Great idea and nice PP work,
Good job,
TFS....
:) later..

Excellent digital manipulation that resulted to good abstract. Great poem!
Dennis

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