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Copyright: Peter Motzart (motzart) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 132 W: 8 N: 0] (2097)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-05
Camera: Canon 400D, Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-19 1:18
Viewed: 940
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Podczas robienia zdjecia nie ucierpiala zadna lalka ;)
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Serwus Peter,

Mocno zaakcentowana fotografia... Widac duzo pracy wlozonej w przygotowania i stylizacje (uzyles keczupu z Pudliszek? ;]) Pracka zdecydowanie nie dla dzieci... ;]

Pozdrowionka z Jeleniej :]
Pawel

Great staged frame. Well captured and expose. Good colour saturation. Nice make-up and overall directing of the model. I'm not sure i get the idea behind this image. It could be so many thing....maybe the return of a long lost sister of Chukky...)))Have sweet dreams.

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2008-04-19 2:12]

most horror picture in the treklens
but work is too good
iam scared

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  • ilghiz Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 5 N: 25] (138)
  • [2008-04-19 2:18]

If you wanted me to feel disgusted you did it.

Good job Peter. Grim art and certainly not to many people's taste, but you've done a superb job on the light, the props, the makeup.
Rew

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1387 W: 275 N: 1873] (11631)
  • [2008-04-19 3:12]

Piekna sprawa Peter.
Duzo krwi i modelka swietnie ucharakteryzowana do roli siostry in red.
Ciekawe swiatlo i te oczy!
Gratulacje.
Janek Kloss

Hi Peter,

Talking about something totally different! :-)
The light is well done. The blood and the stitches on the cheek feel a bit fake to me. A bit too light, especially on the shirt where it resembles the colour of the red cross a bit too much. Just my two cents, but an interesting compo and good control of the light it is!

Greetz, Dennis

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  • rebel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 228 W: 65 N: 14] (1169)
  • [2008-04-19 5:38]

A skąd wiesz pyatałaś? raz widziałem lake co sie sama poruszała i robiła coś takiego ale w drugą sterone....pozdrawiam, dramatyczne troszke jest ale...moze na dobre jej wyjdzie??

wow what a shot, looks like one of the horror film, very convincing good light and make-up superb. Really nice shot

cris(",)

"dozwolone od 18 lat" - wolę Twoje "Magdy",
ale 2 pkt za oryginalnosc i za wkład w charakteryzację :)

czesc Peter!

gdzie mozna dostac sztuczna krew?!:)
heheh fajna kompozycja..swietny kreatywny pomysl!
dobra robota!
Pozdro

ANIA

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 0 N: 361] (1972)
  • [2009-03-06 15:32]

Smacks of Alice Coopers dead babies, nice pose and framing colour and lighting perfect and again the eyes are haunting

Cheers

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