First Blooms 2

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First Blooms 2
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Copyright: Yan Hay (Photograph2u) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2455 W: 97 N: 2858] (14418)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-22
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: Canon 5D, Canon MP-E 65mm f/2.8 1-5x Macro Photo, SanDisk Extr 3 4GB
Exposure: f/16, 1/200 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-25 8:31
Viewed: 278
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The follow-up on my yesterday post, the second flower.
I think this one is sharp all the way.
I hope the green leaf in the fg is not a nuisance, let me know if it is.

This is captured with my macro lens at 1X.
It is very hard to hold the cam steady even with a table tripod on the ground, the ground is soft and I have to lean the cam towards the flower so I am using only 2 legs of the tripod.
And the dof is very shallow so the slitest movement and it is out of focus.



I ordered yesterday the special 4-Way Macro Slider Rail, it should arrive in a couple of weeks.

PP:
not much: Luko's USM
a little crop on the bottom right.
Fill flash used.

Have a great sunny weekend! :)
kokos101, shelbeesmom, valari, Viking, chrisJ, Refugee, c_rapp, milas, denizler has marked this note useful
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To chrisJ: Thanks lots!Photograph2u 1 05-01 05:44
To Viking: Thx againPhotograph2u 1 05-01 05:37
To Silke: Thank youPhotograph2u 1 04-26 06:40
To valari: Thank youPhotograph2u 1 04-26 06:31
To PierreFrigon: Merci beaucoupPhotograph2u 3 04-25 10:46
To shelbeesmom: Thanks lots!Photograph2u 1 04-25 09:19
To kokos101: Many thxPhotograph2u 1 04-25 08:51
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hi yan!
very beautiful bloom, nice warm tone and great colors, i like it.
tfs
zoran

Wonderful details here Yan!! Love the closeness of this, I can smell it!! Can't wait to see what your slider does!
B-)
Linda

Superbe
Il en émane une certaine douceur.
Bien vu
Pierre

Hi,Yan!
What lovely tender colors!I like details .
regards,valentina

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3045 W: 241 N: 5438] (20329)
  • [2008-04-25 12:47]
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Very lovely light and colours
TFS
silke
P.S. I am going to take a break from TL after this weekend. See you in a month or so.

Again fantastic
Fine job

Rob

Hi Yan

I've missed quite a few of your shots lately. Apologies. A superb floral macro, with warm, earthy colour tones. Tfs!

Even with the rail there will always be a leaf of some sort in the way Yan :). Good colour and detail and just enough sharpness. TFS,
David

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 985 W: 17 N: 1087] (6138)
  • [2008-04-28 18:35]

beautiful lighting and great color and details. Beautifully taken. TFs
Christan

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 532 W: 40 N: 615] (6336)
  • [2008-05-01 20:51]

With that leaf, I think its a little distract to be there, maybe you can use more magnify to this flower yan. I heard from Tjut-tjut that it can be up to 5x. so you can get that center in focus :).

Yan

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1990 W: 375 N: 2064] (20592)
  • [2008-05-02 7:37]

Merhaba myfriend Yan....
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and a very beautiful frame!
Selamlar...
Milas...

Hi Dear Yan :)
Beautiful composition,good macro shot.
Good light and colour.Congrats!!
Cordial Greetings,
Deniz:)

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