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Harbour Lelystad


Harbour Lelystad
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Copyright: Juul Baars (juulbaars) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 509 W: 0 N: 6] (3111)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-08
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-29 14:15
Viewed: 598
Points: 34
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Harbour Lelystad
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  • Great 
  • mcoco Gold Star Critiquer [C: 64 W: 0 N: 1] (592)
  • [2008-04-29 14:51]

great shot Juul!
the colours are magnificant and the sun is perfect round. You could have placed the lighthouse a bit out of the center for a different/better composition.

TFS
Marco

Beautiful subject with great colours and sharpness.

But in my opinion not enough to make a truly great shot. The composition could be better. I'm not a strickt follower of the rule of thirds but I think that most photos, this included, will benefit from the rule. I think this photo would have much more impact if you had used the rule of thirds here.

Cheers,
Jens

  • Great 
  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2046 W: 135 N: 3062] (16549)
  • [2008-04-29 18:28]

Hi Juul,

Excellent shot, great composition and pov, very nice details and sharpness, good clarity and colours, well captured


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

Hello Juul,
This is a fine graphical composition with good shapes!
The sun itself is well exposed, and the light plays nicely with the fine veil of clouds...
Good details and attractive colours!
Greetings,
Pablo -

  • Great 
  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1087 W: 120 N: 1848] (9228)
  • [2008-04-29 23:37]

Wat een pracht Juul! Echt een topper! Wat een prachtige lucht.

'k vroeg even af of je alleen deze plaat hebt geschoten of dat je er wellicht nog een hebt gemaakt met het bootje (?) rechts helemaal in beeld....

Prachtig hoor!

Gr.,
Anneke

Hello Juul,
Great sunset.
Minimalistic as if an abstract artwork.
Continue please...
TFS
Selahattin E
:)

excellent exposure, nice silhouettes and backlight compo
regards
jo

Hello my dear friend,

What a fantastic shot! Marvelous colors, light, contrast! All is perfect here! It's a great job!
Congratulations and TFS,

Sergio
on wednesday

Hello Juul,
Fantastic capture with a very rigorous composition. Amazing colous and detail and an astonishing sun (and colours) capture.
Pure magic. Congrats, jmb

Beautiful shot...
Nice colors...

Hello Juul

This is just amazing and great captured photo excllent details very well presented and great saturated colors well done and TFS Kyle

Hello Juul,
Outstanding! Stunning color and great light..
Definitely picture perfect my friend.

Anan

Thanks for your kind words on my "INSECT 2"

Lovely view, colours are splendid.

Tom

Goed om je weer te zien Juul,ik zie dat je weer op dreef bent.
jan

a good work, even very. To me it is difficult to evaluate competently, since in very it is small experience. I thought such sunsets only on Caribe. thanks

Hi Juul
A very beautiful capture with wonderful colours and sky.
I think what makes this composition difficult to evaluate is that you actually have the tower and the sun to define it. A LOT of cropping from which you lose much of the lovely sky and other points of interest in this photo, will have to be done to comply with the rule of thirds. Cropping off the right to get the tower in thirds make the sun appear centred and cropping off more loses some beautiful sky and results in a square composition that is less attractive.

I covered up parts of the photo to see what the effect will be and this resulted in deciding that your composition is spot on! My feeling is that you should keep it as is!

TFS

Kind regards

Wia

MOOI !

Gewoon uit nieuwsgierigheid :
heb je er ook gemaakt waar de zon
doorheen die toren priemt ?

Groetjes
Jan

  • Great 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1388 W: 122 N: 1975] (16695)
  • [2008-05-13 17:08]

Hello Juul! You are a gifted photographer, I really like your style and your eye. Well done on this one, it's amazing, well done, thanks!

Mario

  • Great 
  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1660 W: 0 N: 1] (10681)
  • [2008-05-14 4:46]

Hallo Juul
Een prachtige klassieker.
Gr Jos

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