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'hot' smile


'hot' smile
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Copyright: Dimi Md (montelo) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 71 W: 2 N: 18] (428)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-23
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D 300, Nikkor 17-55/2.8 G ED
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/8000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-30 10:24
Viewed: 583
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
last week i went to the annual cross country for secondary school and college held here in Brunei, saw this girl smiling at me, hoping to get capture to my camera..from the look at her face it was just those 'hot' tired smile..unfortunately she didn't won..better luck next time..what i did here only using soft filters and a little effort using with the brush tool..

just like to share with TL members from me..

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She does look a little weary here Dimi.

This is an ok shot, personally I think the blur is a little heavy, it's ok in the background but doesn't work so well across her chin and lower lip, or her forehead. If her whole face was sharp, and even the edges of the towel, it would work better.

I also think you could have placed her a little more to the left of the shot, she is very central here and the glimpse of "background" on the far left really doesn't help the shot.

Keep posting mate!
Rew

Salam Bang,
Not bad bang...to be honest bang,IMO kalau boleh jangan terlalu banyak gunakan effect especially the tool brush..kelihatan heavy bang bahagian bawah mulutnya seakan2 menutup kecantikan senyuman nya bang..sudah pun abang pakai wide aperture,macam shallow dof tia,nda cukup sampai focusing abang ani..so kalau boleh biarkan tia clear sharp di bahagian bulatan mua nya..and kalau dapat pakai ISO yang rendah macam 160/125,biar ya gelap dikit tapinya razor sharp tu bang..
Tapi apa2 pon bang nice try on pp..keep it up!

Salam
Abang Anan

Video alum siap sabar ah!nda lagi tekain-kain ni bang..hehehe

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 57 N: 1045] (6681)
  • [2008-05-06 23:57]

Hi Bro

Atu ia panas banar muanya atu..kesian eh kana jamur oleh cikgunya hehehe

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

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  • SmD Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 15] (89)
  • [2008-05-07 7:36]

Hello Dimi,

Well composed. I think it is much better to make use of your great lens to blur most part of the BG rather than using PS editing.

Keep on posting..

SmD

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