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Jazz singer1


Jazz singer1
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Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 24 N: 37] (2517)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-06
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 24-70 / 2.8 L
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-06 14:12
Viewed: 320
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Heather is a jazz singer who has never modelled before.
I have more dynamic shots of her singing but I liked this one.
martin
www.jordanphotographic.co.uk
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Really nice, I like her pose and her sweet smile. Great lightning and colours too.

Hello Martin :)

The word Jazz attracts me :) Excellent portrait ! Wonderful light and contrasts and the model is really nice !
Excellent POV, all my compliments :)
Greetings
Marylou

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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 149 W: 2 N: 34] (424)
  • [2008-05-06 14:46]

Yes, I like it, has professional quality and there really isn't much to improve about it. The model does very well, that hand on the microphone is very expressive. The flower in her hair might be a bit cheesy, but works exceedingly well in the pictures.

Hi Martin,

Nice portrait of Heather. I like how she is holding the microphone. Nice pose, great expression! All around a nice composition.

tfs, Lisa

Perfect your photo looks very professional, she looks very good, like a poster, is that her natural colored hai?

Tyanne

Absoloutely awesome.
Magnificent lighting, wonderfully rich and perfectly saturated color, beautiful skin tones, marvelous sharp detail, well composed. I might have been tempted to crop just a tad on the right, but that is just minor. This is one beautifully done shot. WOW! Many thanks,
Shelly

Martin

parece dibujada te felicito hermosos colores, nitidez y expresión bien logrados

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  • Enka Gold Star Critiquer [C: 105 W: 0 N: 0] (602)
  • [2008-05-06 18:54]

Me gusta mucho, tiene un aire nostalgico. Todo esta tratado con mucho gusto, la calidez de la piel y los colores muy cuidados.

Saludos

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  • Fid Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 33 W: 0 N: 13] (156)
  • [2008-05-06 19:14]

Hi Martin,

Good potrait pic there. Even without the subject we could see that she is a jazz singer. I think the pic could be better if you edit it in PS. make the pic alittle bit more smoother. That should do it.

TFS!

A beautiful picture of a beautiful girl! I know thats a bit clichéd of a critique but I mean every word! Good composition and excellent color and sharpness quality. Thanks for sharing!

Great setup for this singer : the flower in the hair, the dress and the way her delicate left hand is on the mic...

Beautiful portrait. I love the rich colors and composition, including the mic. I'd love to see more.
Tracy

Hi Martin..this is a beautiful shot...great tones and details...excellent composition.

Roger

later

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 893 W: 0 N: 663] (7831)
  • [2008-05-07 12:11]

Well Martin as a jazzfreak I realy like this the hair the dress the colors,it looks like a Kodakcolor or Agfa photo from the 1950s.
Great stuff!
jan

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