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Copyright: Manuj mehta (manujmehta) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 99 N: 1207] (4717)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-21
Categories: Nature
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC FZ 50, Lica 35mm-420mm
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Dedications to TL members (Chapter Two) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-09 23:45
Viewed: 621
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 108
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A gift to Hayati Kessar
very close friend and a softhearted human.

What have you got in your knapsack fair,
White moon, bright moon, pearling the air,
Spinning your bobbins and fabrics free,
Fleet moon, sweet moon, in to the sea?
Roses and lilies, romance and love,
Still moon, chill moon, swinging above?
Slender your feet as a white birds throat,
High moon, shy moon, drifting your boat
Into the murk of the world awhile,
Slim moon, dim moon, adding a smile.


An Original Photograph

Focal Length 16mm
F-Number F/3.2
Exposure Time 1/400sec
ISO 400
Time 6.40pm


I have adjusted Levels, Saturations and Curves to achieve this poetic effect. i have added a frame and resize the photograph for presentation.


regards
Manuj Mehta
Royaldevon, mikolaj_cava, kiwi_explorer, Fortuna, temmeli, black_dream, Hendrika, jusninasirun, andrzej, tlacoyoweb, chrisJ, Vaibhav27, tsesler, sharinawati, vandana2923, rasto1893, boomcat, Urfaust, MLINES, Janone, puffy, fotomek, lilimih33, CallMeMaria, korbee has marked this note useful
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To lilimih33: thanks lilimanujmehta 1 05-17 00:29
To amai26: hello Amaimanujmehta 1 05-15 20:32
To tsesler: hello Tanermanujmehta 1 05-15 00:21
To Geertmoyaert: thanks Greetmanujmehta 1 05-14 22:35
To Helkoryo: thanks Helenmanujmehta 1 05-14 22:35
To Dot: thanks DOTmanujmehta 1 05-14 22:34
To fotomek: hello Tomaszmanujmehta 1 05-14 22:33
To MLINES: hello Murraymanujmehta 1 05-14 22:30
To hairymunky: thanks Grahammanujmehta 1 05-14 21:26
To puffy: thanks Sweetymanujmehta 1 05-14 03:30
To karith: hello karithmanujmehta 1 05-13 22:14
To fserajian: thanks Faramanujmehta 1 05-13 22:14
To rasto1893: hello Rastomanujmehta 1 05-13 21:09
To sharinawati: hello Sharinwatimanujmehta 1 05-13 21:08
To izmirli: hello Gurkanmanujmehta 1 05-13 21:08
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To tanburi: thanks Selahattin Emanujmehta 1 05-13 02:41
To Urfaust: hello Marcomanujmehta 1 05-13 00:19
To boomcat: hello Terrymanujmehta 1 05-12 22:46
To hopalong: hello Pezmanujmehta 1 05-12 22:46
To yanm: hello Yanmanujmehta 1 05-12 04:29
To trekks: hello Billmanujmehta 1 05-12 02:59
To jone: thanks Jonemanujmehta 1 05-12 01:16
To tlacoyoweb: me obligan altamentemanujmehta 1 05-11 23:23
To nishantdavid: thanks NishantDavidmanujmehta 1 05-11 23:01
To andrzej: thanks andrzejmanujmehta 1 05-11 23:01
To jusninasirun: thanks Jusnimanujmehta 1 05-11 23:00
To Hendrika: thanks Elsmanujmehta 1 05-11 23:00
To Fortuna: hello Sergiomanujmehta 1 05-11 22:59
To Fons: hello Fonsmanujmehta 1 05-11 22:59
To black_dream: thanks Diana! how are you?manujmehta 1 05-11 22:57
To Mujahid-Awais: hello Mujahidmanujmehta 1 05-11 22:56
To temmeli: hello linda! how are you?manujmehta 1 05-11 22:56
To chiping59: thanks chipingmanujmehta 1 05-11 22:53
To devylla: thanks Sabinamanujmehta 1 05-10 04:36
To hay_kes: This is for you dear friendmanujmehta 1 05-10 04:14
To photophantom: glad you liked itmanujmehta 1 05-10 03:56
To Ananfoto: hello Ananmanujmehta 1 05-10 03:30
To wieyos: hmmmm.manujmehta 1 05-10 02:10
To lavan: hello Lavanmanujmehta 1 05-10 01:34
To japiey: Hi brothermanujmehta 1 05-10 01:29
To mikolaj_cava: its a crane dearmanujmehta 1 05-10 01:04
To Royaldevon: thanks dear Bevmanujmehta 1 05-10 00:42
To germma: thanks Igormanujmehta 1 05-10 00:01
To WhiteKnight: thanks Davidmanujmehta 1 05-09 23:57
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Critiques [Translate]

Now that's a nice simple image... Very good.
David

Very nice image, great colours Manuj,
beautifull gift for our friend!!!

Have a nice wekkend!

A lovely shot, neighbour!
Your composition is very poetic!
It makes the bird appear to be flying to the moon across a sea of sky!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Manuj! Wonderful sky. Amazing bird (stork?), excellent moon. Good capture. Original shot. Good luck!

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 2 N: 78] (2072)
  • [2008-05-10 1:13]
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nice capture
good work
nice saturation
congrats
Manuj Mehta & Hayati Kessar

Hi Manuj,

A DREAM COMPOSITION !!!!!
Real or Unreal...... this fascinates....
Excellent.
All the best.

jp

Hi Manuj,
Simple composition but very effective. The colorful clouds is just enough to fill the empty space without taking the main focus from the crane and moon. Well composed! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

oh, wow!

that goose is flying to the moon.

great image, brilliantly captured, friend.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Hi Manuj,
Nice view. Well composed. Well done.
Dennis

Hi dear Manuj Bahai,
I am so honoured. You knew this would thrill me . I love the colours and that there are so many different ones. İmpressive composition.. Simply awesome. My very sincere thank you.TFS.
Warm Regards.

hAyAti

Hi Manuj,

Wonderful presentation,a nice gift fron hayati.
The colors are amazing.

sabina

I like the very moody atmosphere of this photo!The flying bird added vigour to the picture too.
Regards,
chiping

Dear Manuj,
this is such a fantastic image which is simple, peaceful & serene.
Really a dreamy one.
Well composed & taken!
My compliments,
Linda

Lovely flight for caoturing the moon.

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1505 W: 1 N: 111] (11397)
  • [2008-05-11 0:18]
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flying to the moon!

HI Manuj,
Ahah..what a shot,very nice composition..
I like how you put the subject in correct rule of third..and i love the colors and sharpness here..
Wonderful capture my friend.
Salute!

Anan

Thanks for your kind words on my "WATER LILY"

Hello Manuj,

Excellent job with wonderful colors. Very well done!
Congratulations and TFS,

Sergio
on sunday

Hi Manuj,

This picture is indeed fit to be called a gift - wonderful blue mood - what a catch!

TFS
Els

Hello Manuj. What a beautiful dedication. Both subjects anchored well in excellent sharpness and detail. Well anchored perspective and clarity of this composition. Well done and best regards. Jusni

Hi Manuj
Wonderful image,stunning colors.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

Hello manuj
The flourocent Bird really suits the blue sky.
Good simple capture very apt for the poem too.

Guau, very nice picture, bien expuesto tanto la luna como el vae, felicidades. :)

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1790 W: 65 N: 0] (16675)
  • [2008-05-12 0:35]
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Hi Manuj ;)
great blue story and gift...
Best regards,
J ;)

Namaste Manuj

Nice capture of the moon & bird, & wonderful blue color tones. Good sharpness & tfs!

Really nice work, here , Manuj! You've sucessfully achieved the effect desired. The poem suits the image perfectly!
TFS! Best regards,
Diana
(**)

hi Manuj

This photo does not show on thumbnail, yet the bird in flight is really very nicely positioned here with respect to distance from the moon. Very nice subtle light, color and mood. Good capture

tfs, bill

Hi Manuj,
Lovely shot,
Nice tribute,
Beautiful bird,
nice poem,
TFS...

Vaibhav..

merhaba dear manuj
excellent blue colours and bird.excellent moon and sky.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 532 W: 40 N: 641] (6450)
  • [2008-05-12 4:20]
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Darn..... oops can we curse in TL ? LOL

very good Manuj. Very good mood, just a wish, well we all can wish, that the bird a little more to the right. So it will be in the third for the composition. But with it or not, I like this. congratulation !!

btw if you can, you can clean up the noise a little to give it more dreamy feel

Hello Manuj,
Beautiful dedication for Hayati. Incredible colors and a beautiful composition. Spectacular!

Best regards,
Sharina

Hello Manuj,
Super, nice photo - good composition - very nice colours -amazing effect...
Regards
Rastislav

hello Manuj,

very sweet of you to give our friend Hayati this shot.. beautiful 2 subjects here.. well capture love the colours.. well done.

regards, terry

ciao Manuj..
your tribute is great.. with a good compo.. and this incredible detail of the bird flying.. taken in a perfect way!! great colours in BG.. wonderful cromatism!! thanks
ciao Marco

Hi Manuj. This is very special. I like bird photos, and birds and the moon, it all comes together beautifully.
It could be called "Flying to the Moon"
TFS. Murray.

wow,
what a compo Manuj, with excellent colours,
no need to say anything,
just, I love it,
welldone and tfs
Taner
:) tomorrow

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3295 W: 84 N: 2609] (17493)
  • [2008-05-13 1:31]

Hello Manuj.
Lovely simple impression picture.
Very well presented too.
Best regards from Jan

Hello Manuj,
Minimalistic but effective shot. I like color transitions and moon and bird as a white points.
TFS
Selahattin E

hello manuj

perfect gift for Dear Hayati

very nice composition
good colors, clarity

tfs
jagroopsingh

Hello Manuj,
Simple and beautiful card.
Very nice feelings shown. TFS
Vandana
later

Hi Manuj
wow, excellent shot, wonderful work, amazing mood.........
rgds
Magda

Hi Manuj

Really like the aspect, with the moon in one quadrant, and the bird in the other. The colours are perfect.
An excellent image to dedicate to a friend.

Thanks
Graham

Hi Manuj
Very beautiful picture, the colours and composition are as ever superb
Regards Pez
:) later

Beautiful sense of space and freedom and forever:)

Hi Manuj

This is a fantastic shot, you have captured the moment well, the thumbnail does not do it justice. Well done and tfs

Regards,

Fara

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2046 W: 135 N: 3062] (16547)
  • [2008-05-14 3:01]
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Hi Manuj,

What can I said... awesome work, I love the colours here, just so peaceful and relaxing, very nice captured.


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

Very perfect photo
Great colours and soft tones
It is perfectly in balance
TFS
Cynthia

today no critique - just wow!
best regards
Tomasz

Manuj,

waw I love your picture. The composition is simple, it expresses the greatnes of nature.

Geert

Hello Manuj

A wonderful capture here and nicely dedicated to a kind person, Wonderful hues and tones with good focal interest in the bird and the moon

TFS regards helen

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 780 W: 0 N: 1191] (4966)
  • [2008-05-14 16:21]
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HI Manuj
A very lovely rather moody presentation which I am sure Hayati will really love receiving.
Beautiful work
Dot

Fantastic, Beautiful, great composition, wish I also could take picture like this.

Hello Manuj!
Excellent and delicate blue composition!
Nice dedication for Hayati!
Best regards!
Lili

Hi Manuj,

This is a lovely presentation . .
Beautifully composed . .
Two interesting things in a frame . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Many thanks for your kind words on 4 or 6 eyes? .

I don't know the reason about Ananfoto . .

Excellent! What a capture. Unique moment. TFS

Lorena

Hi Manuj,
Amazing composition! The bird flying towards the moon!!
Very beautiful colors and wonderful sharpness and DOF.
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Your feeling for mood and light is very well developed manuj.
jan

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