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on the other side of the wall


on the other side of the wall
Photo Information
Copyright: vikram dasgupta (jumpy11) (59)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-29
Exposure: f/3.6, 1/8 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-11 6:29
Viewed: 251
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
he was a good bus driver at once upone a time . now he sells country liquor at this spot .
this was the first photograph of my choice in this camera.
I smile , i live,
I am my time keeper.
The wall was never there
now the throbbing veins are onthe other side .
(poetry by shohili,my good freinds wife)


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  • Good 
  • tats (156)
  • [2008-05-14 5:41]

nice ambience in the shot, nostalgic.

regards

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1251 W: 46 N: 1286] (6295)
  • [2008-05-18 14:02]

Hi Vikram
First off a belated welcome to TL.
I like the potential in this image - the lighting is well done. maybe a bit more shutter speed to sharpen the image and move the camera to your right to include a bit more of the side of his face that is in the light and less that is the dark.

Thanks for the recent visit, appreciated.

Dan

I really like the light, it is true that some sharpness would have showed more of the expression but nevertheless it is a beautiful portrait!

Kind wishes,

Diana

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