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Copyright: Agoes SK (wieyos) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 616 W: 32 N: 928] (3620)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-22
Categories: Nature, Portrait
Camera: Pentax K20D, Pentax DA 50-200mm 4-5.6 ED
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-13 5:18
Viewed: 252
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi Folks,

This young sparrow seems to has been left by her parents. Not only she has to learn how fly by herself, she also has to survive on her own. That's life - one has to be tough and fit in order to survive.

Thanks for viewing.

Agoes

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Hi Agoes

great Clarity
perfect sharpness

fear is clearly visible in the eyes of the bird!

very nice composition!

tfs
jagroopsingh

Hello Agoes,
what a superb capture of yours again,
no need to say anything,
i just felt really sorry for her, she looks very poor and alone, but what can we do, as you said so "that's life"....
regards,
Taner

Hello Agoes,

I love this picture. It looks very sharp.
Well done. :)

p/s : This sparrow seems to have a bright future.

Howdy Agoes!
Nice picture. Very nice scene. Original composition.
Regards!

Great capture on the birdie, Agoes. Very good focus and DOF. Fine details with good background of bokeh. Thanks for the note.
Cheers!
Freddie :)

Hi Agoes,

Oh oh oh, what a slightly pathetic fellow this is!! Like he just tumbled out of the nest. This bird doesn't look all that tough, but let's just hope for the best ;-).

Greetings,
Dennis

Hi Agoes

I think this is your best bird shot. Excellent work.

tfs, bill

Hello Agoes,I think that you have summed him up in your title,untidy.
A very well captured picture of this young sparrow.The details are so clear.
I like the placing of him in the frame.
Tfs, regards Jean.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1264 W: 119 N: 1832] (15159)
  • [2008-05-13 17:24]

Poor thing! Well done Agoes on this very sharp shot of the youngster, good work all over, thanks!

Mario

Salam Bro,
Again you did very well bro,wahh..sampai kembang bulunya bro meliat lens bro ani..
Macam meliat subjek yang menakutkan saja..hehehe
Shot yang cukup baik bro dengan detailnya sekali..Salute bro..

Anan

Yes he's looking a little untidy, but you've captured amazing clarity and detail. Great shot.
Trudy

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 379 W: 0 N: 209] (2184)
  • [2008-05-13 22:49]

can view every details of the feather, a bit look like leaves. what a sharp and focused image, amazing job, Agoes

yang ne sama si adhan punya burung kaini? hehe.. kamu pigi ambil gambar sama2? apa pun well done.. terang dan sharp..

regards, nong

Assalamualaikum Agoes. Awesome perch of this juvenile tree sparrow on the mossy chain link. The detail captured by your excellent optics at full 200mmFL f/5.6 is flawless. I just crave the vivid plumage and the sharpness around the head here. Minor loss around the tail due to shallow depth but the background is totally silenced to perfection. Very well done and a very good job for TL. Best regards and have a nice day. Jusni

Salam Bro,
very nice portrait of this bird.Superb POV, sharp and details.TFS.
Best regards.

hAyAti

Hi Agoes,
Wooowww...
Composition, sharpness and colors are all of them marvelous. As if a postcard.
TFS
Selahattin E

What a fantastic shot Agoes ... stunning detail and perfect sharpness. Just amazing. The clarity of its beak and eye is superb, you can see how birds evolved from the dinosaurs.

Rew

Hello Agoes,
what a cute little sparrow;)
Like it so much. TFS,
Siarhei

I love this.
Exelent capture.
Light is perfect,the clarity is exelent.
The colors are so beautiful.
I love it :D


sabina

Assalamualaikum Agoes,
Gosh! This is an incredible shot.
The details are so sharp and perfect.
Brilliant composition. Love this!

Best regards,
Sharina

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  • rigz (60)
  • [2008-05-14 20:42]

Hi Agoes...

Creative shot.

Looking 4word ur next shots.

Geoffrey Ramji

Hello Agoes,
Poor little fellow!
Looks like he has been in a fight, or maybe he was hit by a local typhoon hehehe...
The plumage is well captured with sharp fine details, excellent pose and well balanced composition!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • datis Silver Star Critiquer [C: 35 W: 4 N: 2] (214)
  • [2008-05-22 16:00]

Hi Agose,

Very nice and excelent details. I wish this young sparrow be success in her life as her photogenetic style.:)

TFS.
Daryoosh

Excellent work. Good detail and light.

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  • malain Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 97 W: 27 N: 85] (1203)
  • [2008-05-24 23:32]

Hi Agoes,
Wonderful composition of this brilliant capture. The poor little bird looks completely lost on this rusted fence.
Have a nice day, Michel

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  • Ber Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 191 W: 35 N: 18] (2025)
  • [2008-06-24 9:22]

Hi Agoes
Excellent portrait! Superb composition! Great shot.
regards

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