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Lonely but lovely
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Copyright: Tjutjut Bramantoro (tjutjut) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1857 W: 82 N: 2946] (13741)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-27
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D300, AF-S VR Nikon 105mm f/2.8 Macro
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-15 5:28
Viewed: 336
Points: 72
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
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I made mistake yesterday . . submit the wrong picture . . it was too dark . .

I shared previously similar flower, but was composed in horizontal format, and was not complete flower . .

This was the only flower in the wild garden . . and got limited light when I captured it . .

Crop, edit BG slightly, resize . .

Thank you for viewing it . .

Cheers,
Tjutjut

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lilimih33, kross1, Teresat, vandana2923, shelbeesmom, chrisJ, Vaibhav27, Silke, Marylou, Kiwis, manujmehta, jusninasirun, puffy, tanburi, gnada, Royaldevon, Jong has marked this note useful
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  • Great 
  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4018 W: 207 N: 3391] (26019)
  • [2008-05-15 5:53]

Hi Tjutjut

Indah sekali! The dark bg adds good graphism, & accentuates the whites & color, in this superb floral macro. Tfs!

Beautiful shot Tjutjut! Really nice low tones create mood here! We all make mistakes now and again!...it's ok!!
B-)
Linda

Tjutjut,
Excellent picture, The soft tones are wonderful. I really like the light on the flower and cone along with the dark BG. The flower really stands out. Another great shot.
Regards,
Kevin

olá tjutjut

I saw and pointed the photo yesterday. I saw this one was dark. Your title is lonely and lovely. I thought that darkness gaves the mood. this is one is more lovely but its not so lonely as the one of yesterday. ( the only thing I though you can do better yesterday somehow was to retred the tone blue of the white. I think about our memory keeps a flower.

My regards

Teresat

My rega

....and elegantly delicate....
Dennis

  • Great 
  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4878 W: 177 N: 5523] (30102)
  • [2008-05-15 7:13]

Hello my friend..

Simple, beautiful, delicate and soft.
I like this flower, and in this Bg in black
he still enhances more your beauty and your details.
Great shot!
Congratulations

Sérgio

Hello Mas Tjutjut,
Another cool photo! Gimana sih caranya menghasilkan foto yang ekspresif? Kalau saya boleh tau, BG-nya di-edit dengan apa ya?
Thanks & Regards, Imelda

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 533 W: 40 N: 618] (6356)
  • [2008-05-15 7:41]

nanti aku kapan2 pinjam lensa nya ya pak LOL :D

Hello Tjutjut!
Delicate this calla-lilly!
Good sharpness!
Looks wonderful with black background!
Best regrads!
Lili

  • Great 
  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 0 N: 140] (1321)
  • [2008-05-15 9:08]

Hi Tjutjut,

again a beautiful shot! This flower was handle with great care…

TLS,
Romeu

Hi Tjutjut,
Excellent shot and details of this beautiful macro,Lovely colours.
Well done.TFS.
Greetings
H.Ayhan

yes your right this one is better, funny i didnt notice on the last one!
tfs,
scott

Hi Tjutjut,
Simple but sharpnes shot of lovely beauty...
Nice presantation and good job.tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1133 W: 42 N: 1091] (5572)
  • [2008-05-15 13:04]

Hi Tjutjut
These are amazing flowers and so many way to photgraph them. Like your selection of BG - provides good contrast. The even light was also a benefit.

Been off the machine for a while but should be back for a while now.

Dan

Hi Tjutjut :)

Very nice shot ! Soft and natural colours, excellent background ... Good job my dear friend :)

Take care
Marylou ;)

Hi Tjutjut

This is better! Brighter certainly. It is still a little dark IMO but that's just me maybe!

Composition is nice although with such a black background it could be placed higher in the frame, more central, and it would work well.

Rew

  • Great 
  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1458 W: 0 N: 164] (10972)
  • [2008-05-15 15:39]

Hi Tjutjut,
Capture quality with an excellent light which revives the details of this beautiful flower. Thanks
Regards
Diane

Wonderful combination.
The most ellegant flower with a great black background.


sabina

hello Tjutjut
how are you dear friend?
this is a wonderful twisted flower, haha haha (theme is still in the mind)
wonderful white and beautiful yellow inside
good soft light
sharp and detailed.
TFS
MAnuj MEhta
:) soon

hello dear Tjutjut

great composition with dim lighting
standing out from surrounding as per your style
very nice bg
good colors

excellent as always!
tfs
jagroopsingh

and your views are pending for my last two / three postings; pls visit

Hi Tjut. Another beautiful capture in sharp detail against the darkened background. Superb shot and well exposed image. Thanks for sharing and best regards. Jusni

  • Great 
  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2029 W: 135 N: 2986] (16246)
  • [2008-05-16 3:30]

Hi Tjutjut,

What a beautiful shot, I like the details, your composition and presentation is very nice, good textures and lighting.


Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

A wonderful light, very well contrasted picture very well composed.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hello Tjutjut,
Wonderful flower and well suited black BG.
Lonely Lovely and Elegant...
Congratulations...
Selahattin E

Hello Tjutjut,
Simple and beautiful shot of calla lily.
I like the dim light on cone of the flower.
May be a little USM can work to lift more beauty. TFS
Vandana
later

  • Great 
  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1957 W: 59 N: 1890] (11835)
  • [2008-05-16 6:29]

Hi Tjutjut...
You gat good heading for it, "Lonely but lovely"...
Very nice PP work - Bravo...
Rgd. George

  • Great 
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3104 W: 253 N: 5654] (21142)
  • [2008-05-16 8:13]

Very fine clean composition with outstanding contrasts
TFS
silke

hello tjutjut!
great flower photo and nice composition, i like this black BG
tfs
zoran

Hello Tjutjut,

You are a master at flower photography.
This is beautiful, moody and as you point out, lonely!
The details, tones and presentation are excellent!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Many thanks for your kind comments on 'Twisted snake-like branches.'

Beautiful photo Tjutjut,nice bg and composition.
Best regards,
Ralf

  • Great 
  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1196 W: 95 N: 1731] (6775)
  • [2008-05-16 22:23]

hi Tjutjut

Nicely captured macro of the flower in shadow and against black BG. Soft mood.

tfs, bill

  • Great 
  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 385 W: 0 N: 223] (2264)
  • [2008-05-17 5:33]

great contrast here, white petal against the black bg, yellow stamen against the white petal. simle and elegent. wonderful job, Tjutjut

  • Great 
  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 933 W: 39 N: 592] (9989)
  • [2008-05-17 12:47]

Hi Tjutjut,
elegant presentation of tis beautiful flower.Congratulations my friend.TFS.Necla.:)later.

Hi Tjutjut,
Really a very nice tittle perfectly match to the photo,
I like the black BG,
Very detailed shot,
Good job,
TFS...
Vaibhav...
:) ltr...

masih gelap mas, detailnya kurang keliatan.
tapi dan juga BGnya terlalu gelap, mungkin kalau ada sedikit warna lain untuk memisahkan BG akan lebih menarik.
kapan kita photo2 lagi nih ?

rgds
Haldian

  • Great 
  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1712 W: 60 N: 0] (15540)
  • [2008-05-22 5:24]

Hi Dear friend ;)))
nice ans pleasent...TFS
Best,
J ;)

Hi Tjutjut
Excellent macro of this flower. I like the dark background very much
Best regards
Melany

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