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One Shiny Day


One Shiny Day
Photo Information
Copyright: Amir Jusni (popbowl) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 1] (19)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-15
Categories: Macro
Camera: Nikon D40 DSLR, Nikon 18-135 AFS ED DX, Hoya 67mm UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-05-15 23:41
Viewed: 214
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my first macro snap. I woke up early in the morning and I feel so boring. When I look outside, there must be something to do.

This time is quite different because I woke up early and snap a picture. Maybe this is a positive change.

I absolutely don't know what is happening to this flower and I don't know its name. I really hope you guys can tell me about this. :)

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Assalamualaikum Amir,
Cute note you got there.
I think its a hibiscus, about to bloom
to greet the morning light.
Good attempt for a first macro shot.
Sharp capture of the stamen. Nice blurred background.
Nicely done.

Regards,
Sharina

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 413 W: 0 N: 246] (2650)
  • [2008-05-17 5:18]

you image seen to be overexposed and lost the details of the petal at the front part. you focus on the stamen but lack of sharpness. try to use higher f if possible and with tripod. shoot as close as possible for blurry bg. keep trying, Amir

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