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Grad Day


Grad Day
Photo Information
Copyright: Peter Hanington (peterhanington) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 27 W: 113 N: 59] (365)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon Powershot A520
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): kobieta ze snu #5 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-21 1:57
Viewed: 484
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My daughter Lindsey on her high school graduation day. She was the belle of the ball - 17 years old and breaking hearts.

PP'd in PhotoFiltre - minimal cropping, minor adjustment of levels and contrast, framed and titled, copied to PS7, resized and optimised for web
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To rewshearer: Over exposurepeterhanington 2 05-21 03:31
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Hi Peter,

Excellent portrait.
Fine colours, and smiles.
All the best for your lovely family...

jp

Nice positioning of your daughter within the frame, good choice of location and light ... she looks beautiful, and happy on this day.

Maybe it could've used a quicker shutter speed, it's verging into OE on her shoulder, by her elbow, and in her hair - the flesh tones become quite yellow and the detail and texture are a little lost. The saturation is overall not quite as rich as it would be, too, if the exposure was quicker.

Overall though a nice shot

Rew

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  • Uza Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 14] (723)
  • [2008-05-21 2:25]
  • [+]

hi,
the composition is very ok in here. I like the matching strcture of dress and tree :) it looks very intresting .. but I think that exposure isn't good enough.. it's too light .. and this unfotrunatelly distroy this pic for me .. :(
cheers
Iza

Beautiful portrait with leaf cloths.

Graduation? or Prom? Shelby has to wear her purple gown for graduation. So you have a 17 year old too? Challenging? HAHA! Very nice work, and yes I see a little OE on the tree...or is the tree white? Hard to work in sunshine sometimes!
B-)
Linda

Hello Peter

A beautiful young lady and a wonderful portrait. I hope you are very proud both of her and this image

TFS regards Helen

Congrats Peter for beautiful daughter :)
Very nice dress!
Bravo

TFS

KISSes from Poland!

Ania

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 14 N: 944] (5626)
  • [2008-05-21 7:42]

Hi Peter,
You are a lucky man with such a lovely model/daughter!
I like this portrait very much.
Very nice colours and a lovely smile.
Greetings from Netherland,
Adri

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