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ancient mystery
Photo Information
Copyright: Dorota Grzelecka (doris) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 46 W: 0 N: 9] (248)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-05-11 9:17
Viewed: 653
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
a panorama view from castle in lisbon. i tried to catch a magical historic atmosphere of that lovley city..
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A lovely view, Dorothy, but it appears digitized and the horizon isn't straight. Perhaps it is scanned?

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  • Nikol (44)
  • [2005-05-13 16:00]

Hi Doris,
It's really a similar theme, like mine. I like the dark window, and the good panorama inside!
I give back the points! :)
Nikolett

Merhaba Dorothy,Çok güzel bir atmosfer ve şehir. Ben beğendim.))
great shot.well done..

cheers

Latif

If a can change 2 things to the pic to make it perfect.
1) have an object sitting/standing at the window frame. If you are so lucky to have a cat sitting there looking outside, it would be perfect. (very difficult to do)
2) use the flash to lighten the frame of the window. Otherwise it looks like just a frame over a fantastic view.
Keep on posting.

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4269 W: 414 N: 6836] (42744)
  • [2006-01-28 4:00]

Hi Dorota

Good use of the arched window, as a framing device, for this superb overview of the city. An excellent pov, with good sharpness & color. Tfs

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