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• pixelblur (616)
• [2008-06-30 23:49]
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Great lighting, focus and composition! I like that the rock glass is in soft focus. Nice work!

Just a small suggestion tho... be aware of the reflections caught on shiny surfaces.. maybe you can fire your camera remotely or on timer so that you wont show on the reflection.

TFS!!!

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• WhiteKnight (2481)
• [2008-07-01 1:04]
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Hi Jay - very well done, well composed, good in B&W. Maybe I'd have draped a cloth over the whole setup to get rid of the reflections in the bottles.
Good work though and well thought out.
David

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• tracer (6101)
• [2008-07-01 6:55]
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same setup i used when i started experimenting still lifes. well done Jay.
one tip: try to use a polarizer, will work most of the time.
in my opinion reflections are nice, as long as they are controlled and they dont show a lot whats on front of it.
try some more!

TFS

i a n

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• milas (24221)
• [2008-07-02 7:11]
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merhaba myfriend Jay...
very enteresting work...
selamlar

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• bupga (876)
• [2008-07-02 11:34]
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Well composed Jay. I like the arrangement of your subject and it suites to B&W. I agree with Tracer maybe polarizer can help to control the reflections. Well done bro.

TFS....Buddy

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• Cat_Mouse (3506)
• [2008-07-04 3:54]
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Hello Jay,

Fine composed and exposed shot. Fine lighting and contrast!

Malik & Mary.

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• monivandrevitz (882)
• [2008-07-04 16:11]

nice capture;)))good work,even with reflection.great composition.
regerds
monika

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• Mujahid-Awais (4215)
• [2008-07-04 22:31]

Beautiful still life. Light captured well here.

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• joelforte (1082)
• [2008-08-15 20:02]
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hanep very creative ka pare, all in a mini size pro malupet ang resulta, may smoke pa, pro alam mo medyo alam mo na black is not always appealing sa iba, buti sa mga tulad natin gandang ganda tayo sa itim at madilim, kaso baka may mag comment na masyadong maitim, sabagay ang mahalaga is masaya ka sa shot mo, at hindi points ang habol mo, tulad ko i post not for the points pro dahil gusto ko yung ipopost ko na makita ng iba, to share ba, kahit minsan panget yung shot ko pro yung message eh maganda post ko parin, congrats uli