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Critiques [Translate]
![Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 15 W: 2 N: 59]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-g.gif){kind=small}
Mind jarring image and very nicely captured. Fine composition as well. I believe it would be more effective if the white crayon were exchanged with the yellow. In this arrangement the white gets lost against the background and that element of the composition lacks definition. Putting the yellow crayon in that corner solves the problem. Another possibility would be to not use white at all but chose a different, more saturated color. But I like this image very much. Thanks.
hi rafael i know those big pens, they sell the same in venezuela!;-) this makes a nice shot! a wider aperture f1.8 or 2 might have blurred further the bottom ogf the photo.. still is a great compo and shot Rafaeil!;-)
Welcome to TL!
Beautiful experimental picture Rafael, sharp and clear too.
- CristianoP
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 53 W: 4 N: 8]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif)
(168) - [2004-06-01 10:18]
Tri legal essa foto!
Achei muito interessante a perspectiva...
Utilizou algum software para a edição ou ela está original? O plano de fundo está muito bom...
EXCELENTE !
diante de uma foto linda é como diante de uma obra de arte, menos se fala mais se sente ! Continue a nos surpreender !
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- danbachmann
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 15 N: 65]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(555) - [2004-06-08 13:28]
A very clear and sharp image that looks like something for a slick advertisement.
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- lacouette
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 463 W: 111 N: 74]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(721) - [2004-07-07 5:44]
Very good perspective. I love the colors. Good composition. Perfect DOF.
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- davidbat
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 300 W: 8 N: 92]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif)
(1247) - [2005-09-08 20:54]
Muito bom!
Excelente composição, limpa e com boas cores.
Gostei da perspectiva !
David
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- iliannak
(3494)
- [2006-02-04 7:28]
very nice close up :o)
very colourful as well :o)
TFS it Rafael
ili
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- harpya
(9917)
- [2006-05-21 10:18]
Hi Rafel,
Interessante foto, gostei da composição, armação maravilhosa, afiadissimo.
Cores e detalhes, grandes!!
Parabens
Sergio
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- Aragon1981 (80)
- [2009-02-27 7:17]
Witaj.
Fajne ujęcie i kolory,ujmujące na wierzchołkach .
Pozdrawiam.
Piotr D.
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- daisydaisy
(9204)
- [2009-02-27 7:19]
Simple and good idea.
Great pov for these pencils.
I like it
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