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Partial Desaturation “Flowers”


Partial Desaturation “Flowers”
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Copyright: Wanda McKinnon (WMcK) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 735 W: 8 N: 1671] (6446)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-08
Categories: Nature, Experimental
Camera: Canon 5D, Cannon 70-200 f2.8 IS USM, 77mm Haze UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday theme 2008/07/11 "Desaturation" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-10 3:51
Viewed: 416
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 94
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Partial Desaturation “Flowers”
Good morning folks. Here is my contribution to Friday’s Theme. I really enjoy the patience it takes to do one of these and I spent too much time working on it, but it was so much fun.
Thanks to Helen for the chance to make us test our abilities.
Raw converted
Duplicate Layers, desaturated bottom layer, Erased out all colour but for the one flower. There was a lot of single width pixel work on this one , but I am slowing getting a nice even stroke to get exactly the right edges.
Framed, Resized, sharpened and signed.

Thanks for helping me learn and grow and have a great weekend.

eosnut, patshoo, boomcat, shelbeesmom, mesquens1, GreenBaron, Royaldevon, mvdisco, cunejo200, tnahari, Janice, Danert, Silke, lilimih33, chrisJ, Refugee, Janone, juyona, dareco, Beger, manujmehta, Hendrika, Hormon_Manyer has marked this note useful
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VERY NICE COMPOSITION AND
GOOD PRESENTATION,
CONGRATS
BW

Olá Wanda,
Yes, a great contribution for thr theme.
Great presentation.
Regards
Raimundo

Hi Wanda,
You did an excellent job here. Great how the yellow jumps out from de desaturated image. Excellent sharpness. A fine contribution to the theme my dear!
Hans

Good clarity and management of depth! I would have desaturated the green in the stem too. But that's personal taste.

Joris

Hello Wanda,

A very good desaturation. This bright flower is an eye-catcher.
Good dof and nice, sharp details.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • ozann Silver Star Critiquer [C: 20 W: 0 N: 8] (164)
  • [2008-07-10 4:46]

voooovvv
çok güzel bir fotoğraf
gerçekten tebrik ederim nasıl yaptığınızı merak ettim

merhaba dear wanda
Excellent interesting flowers.excellent clours and idea.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi Wanda...
Beautiful artwork...
Beautiful composition...
Have a nice day...
Andro

Wow Wanda! Very lovely posting.

Very Very Nice contribution to the theme. My compliments.

Well done. TFS

Josée :)

Hi Wanda,
Beautiful picture of this flower and great desaturation,Excellent POV. and details, nice contrast in black & White ..Very well done for the theme.
Michel

Hi Wanda,

Well your entry really fits the theme. The orange coneflower is really attractive against a group of blurred supporting flowers in the b/g. The Fibonacci spirals in the colored conehead, always the feature that I like to focus on, is evident, vivid, and sharp. Congratulations. I really like this. Greetings!

Danilo

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 280 W: 62 N: 439] (3564)
  • [2008-07-10 10:18]

Hi Wanda,very exacting work with a steady hand required for this desaturation.Well done,impressive.
Best Regards
Ron

Simply magnificent Wanda!
This is masterful work you have done here.
Great example of how to use desaturation.
Beautiful shot.
- Vincent

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  • tracer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 752 W: 26 N: 1128] (5929)
  • [2008-07-10 11:44]

so sharp it cuts Wanda. i like the saturation of the yellow.

your pp work is just perfect i could do no better. which reminds me i must post one for this theme.

Hi Wanda
outstaning presentation.
great job you've done here for this perfect desaturation.
compliment.
tsilla

hi wanda, this is very nice, the color contrast is amazing, excellent composition, dof and details, really nice work wanda!
take care,
tfs,
scott

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3206 W: 225 N: 6900] (27355)
  • [2008-07-10 13:17]

This is really well done Wanda.
Congratulations - it can't have been easy, especially with all those petals and top details.
I am very impressed.
Super composition too, with the angle of the flowers
TFS
Janice

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  • Danert Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 518 W: 11 N: 780] (3593)
  • [2008-07-10 13:34]

Hey ! Nice job Wanda . You kept the colored one at the right place for a good composition . You did a nice PP work . The color is popping out well .
Daniel

very well prepared set-up.
like it that you included the stem of the flower.
colors are great. excellent work
y2koSan

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3368 W: 284 N: 6439] (23900)
  • [2008-07-10 15:35]

Very fine composition, superb details, fine PP work
TFs
silke

Hello Wanda!
Lovely composition for Fridays theme and perfect perspective!
Beautiful flower colours and great focus!
Best regards!
Lili

Hi Wanda, this is beautiful, I love it-so sorry Ron and I did not catch up with you while driving through last month, we were so close, we realised afterwards, we were in Perth, darn, how did we miss you--just put it down to having put 15,000K on the car----toooo much driving!!!!!Lynne Kelman

Excellent image, nice composition originality. Well done.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hi Karen,
Very beautiful presentation vith excellent contribution to the theme.Well compo.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

stunning entry, Wanda.. very sharp and bright.. no noise at all.. the colour is just fantastic.. good choice of the entry.. well done.

regards, terry

Clearly and outstanding composition,Well sharpness on subject with good bokeh monotone BG.Good work,TFS.

Hi Wanda,
This is one of the standout partial desaturation contributions, well done.
You did a wonderful job of isolating the flower, but, you did it the hard way.
Try desaturating the top layer, then erasing only the flower.
Pete.

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3348 W: 688 N: 1921] (16125)
  • [2008-07-11 1:18]

What a wonderful job you did here !


thanks,
v

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4194 W: 222 N: 3837] (28101)
  • [2008-07-11 4:17]

Hi Wanda

A nice entry in the desaturation theme. The single yellow flower, stands out well, against the b&w bg. Tfs!

WOW! That thing just POPS out at you! Really nice work on this one Wanda! Intense yellow in a sea of BW! Makes this really sand out!
B-) B-)
Linda

Hello Wanda

Absolutely superb! a really sharp and well detailed image with perfect DOF and excellent desatuation.

TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

Wonderful work Wanda. Superb focus and well converted. Your 1 pixel PP work has created good, clean edges,
David

Excellent, Beautiful macro art work.

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3362 W: 86 N: 2730] (18045)
  • [2008-07-12 5:29]

Excellent work you did, Wanda.
Perfect desaturation. Superb combinaton and contrast.
Best regards from Jan

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 865 W: 0 N: 1395] (5654)
  • [2008-07-12 6:10]

HI Wanda
I like the placement of the flowers with the colored one being placed to the left, giving the shot a very nice dof in mono while the flower takes the spot.
Nice work
Dot

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2470 W: 0 N: 878] (13240)
  • [2008-07-12 6:41]

Hola Wanda,
fino trabajo desaturación y color,
bello encuadre y pov,
saludos

Nice selective coloriztion.
Good b/g, DOF, the coloured flower is clean and clear.

Tom

indeed efficient :)
regards
jo

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1157 W: 15 N: 597] (10372)
  • [2008-07-12 8:13]

I somehow missed this one and it is a beauty!! Added to my favorites, excellent composition, and I love that vibrant yellow. Superb detail. Great job! TFS and have a happy day!

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3046 W: 568 N: 3415] (15131)
  • [2008-07-13 21:07]

Hi Wanda,
Effective work on this flower!
Very eye-catching on the B&W. Good composition and sharpness! Really, this is a pleasant image!Bravo! Annie

hello wanda
how are you?
lovely post for the theme
wonderful presentation, i just love thgis colour against the desaturated BG
very focused and sharp. lovely slightly tilt down composition.
good looking room

regards
Manuj MEhta

Hi Wanda,

Indeed, while I was away attending a wedding, there was the theme - this works out absolutely great.
Very enjoyable picture, have yet to see the rest but I am sure this was one of the best for the theme.

TFS
Els

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1462 W: 126 N: 2045] (17677)
  • [2008-07-14 10:37]

Hello Wanda! Very fine job on the desaturation, it works very well in your picture. The details are very sharp and the composition is great, well done mon amie! :-) Thanks!

Mario

Bonjour Wanda
Je me sens commesi je négligeais de visiter tes photos. but I'm sooooooooooooooo busy in this season that I can't find the time to visit my treklens friends. That Rudbeckia is just perfect in its natural color. I know how much work it means in PP work but I think it was worth doing. That presentation is excellent. a great contribution to the theme.
Bravo
Serge

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 638 W: 6 N: 428] (2746)
  • [2008-07-17 19:23]

I like the final effect. Thanks for explaining the steps. Putting the colour in the corner is a good idea. TFS. K2

Hi Wanda
wow, this is beautiful a very moody photo, really well done, great work. TFS
Donna:o)

Hi Wanda,
Absolutely excellent job, top compo, saturation and desaturation... Bravo. No need to say more: into my favorite images immediately.
Best regards, László

Bravo pour ce magnifique travail.....
Un réalisation accrocheuse....
Super!!!
Claude

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