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Copyright: Jeffry Surianto (wealthy88) (595)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-14
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 20D, 18-55mm, Compact Flash Card
Exposure: f/8, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Pics to learn from [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-05-15 21:39
Viewed: 2815
Favorites: 17 [view]
Points: 86
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Beaucoup de douceur dans ce portrait; belle utilisation d'un éclairage diffus. Bravo!

Tout simplement magnifique.....
Tres pro.....
Gros bravo...

Wow, What a great lighting use. Nice composition and detailed. So soft and so lovely. Well done.
Latif

this is amazing!!!
i'm blown away.
what an incredible job.

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  • giovi (115)
  • [2005-05-15 23:14]

l'immagine sembra vellutata, soffice, dolce.
Mi piace molto il contrasto di luci.
foto di grande impatto visivo, attira l'attenzione.
scusa se uso l'italiano per esprimermi ma per ora le mie conoscenze dell'inglese scarseggiano.

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  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 102 N: 435] (4791)
  • [2005-05-15 23:26]

Masterly use of light - what a composition. The mellowness that you have lent to the picture is simply out of the world.

What beauitful lighting, contrast and detail.
This is a gorgeous portrait!

wow! wat a great photo! very very nice ..lighting, pose, mood, all in a very nice way. the softness and the dark background also made this photo looks so outstanding. well done there..
thong

This is an outstanding photo. The fact that it is posed does not bother me at all. I like the dark above her head, and especially the figure-eight made by the hanging string of pearls. Lovely in all respects. Great job!

hermosísima foto... very beautiful shot!!!

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  • Nols Silver Star Critiquer [C: 23 W: 0 N: 8] (228)
  • [2005-05-16 2:21]

Very well done Jason! I hope you add some notes here.

WOW, i can only say the next...
What a very beautifull picture, the play with light, the atmosphere and composition. I can only give you two point but you sure deserve better! Magnifique!
I would love to see more work like this and maybe a bit of a note how you did this excellent piece of work.
TFS, Richard

One cannot avoid being connected to the photo emotionally. It is simple, well composed and supported by nice directional lighting with just the right focus. Well done!

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  • torr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 50 N: 80] (1735)
  • [2005-05-16 5:01]

Like the light.
A lot.
Good wel taken picture.
See you on planet tl.
Torr

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  • Gand Gold Star Critiquer [C: 355 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-16 5:52]

What a perfect lighting you made here Jason!
Smooth and clear portrait.
Congrats.

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  • Carma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 129 N: 297] (4974)
  • [2005-05-16 5:56]

Nice use of lightening. I love dark part in back side of her. Nice pose and dress. Very professional aproach!
Bravo!

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-05-16 9:45]

Very nice and soft Jason. Good work, B

Good mood! Very soft! I like the compoition! of light & shadows. The posture is good!

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2005-08-06 4:53]

Full of softness, very nice pose and expression. I like the playing of light here, great, Jason !

Beautiful lighting. Love the eyes and the angle of he face and the way the light falls on her face.

I like the composition, the sensouness the picture has, the waiting that the lady is showing and the light that makes teh whole effect dramatic.
Some of the best pictures on TL.

Great light, beautiful model.

beautiful colors and tones
i like the soft light and mood of the photo :)

very nice, smooth and calm. tanx.

Simply beautiful, well composed, with an excellent lightning.
Compliments Jason!
Martine

Just Amazing. The tenderness of skin and the tender light makes its excellent.

excellent shot with excellent light and shadow combination plus well composed portrait.thanks for sharing.

THe soft light makes this a stunning hpoto. Well done Jason.

jaco

perfect jason. thanks. jerzy

Tout simplement superbe !

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-06-13 17:47]

Nice composition and details with good lighting & contrast. Well done.
Mitra

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  • MikiM Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 5 N: 19] (278)
  • [2006-07-18 3:32]

Hi Jeffry
Congratulation for this nice picture. Nice lighting with a smooth tones - I like the atmoshpere very much!
Miklós

Wonderful picture; never made such quality myself; I'm happy there is still a lot to learn.
Thanks Jeffry
Huub

this one is realy beautiful. excellent work.

Waiting for some who, its nice and lighting, beautiful.

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  • cubi (120)
  • [2006-09-21 10:27]

oh, rat dep!

Crystal clear - the model and light. How soft it is and how sharp at the same time. Delicate and strong in its expression. Absolutely - masterpiece!
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Best wishes!

Hi Jeffry, this is so nice and romantic! You are a great portrait photographer!

Love the soft light here, very well controlled, the black space behind her and her romantic gaze with the veil overy her head.

Really well taken with a beautiful model! Yan :)

ps: many thx for your crit on "A Tender Look". I am glad that you like my Bilitis-like photo :)

This is just a wonderful piece of work... !!! (Wish there was a provision to give more than 2 points)

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2006-12-18 23:00]

A fine prtrait. You have done a great job with the lighting. Expert use of available light. And, of course, the model's beauty adds to the effect.
Salil
Salil

Wow! Amazing photo! Love the lighting!

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  • AKF Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 13 N: 77] (576)
  • [2007-05-01 10:59]

Great portrait. The lighting is perfect and the softness of the image makes it unique and tender. Nothing I would change about this picture except crop it a bit on the top to focus more on the woman. Otherwise, fantastic photo!

superb soft tone and exposure, like it!

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1399 W: 0 N: 1695] (13693)
  • [2008-02-20 10:57]

Perfect female picture with great elegance Jeff.
jan

Wow! this is just beautiful; the lighting on her face and hands and the soft drape of the scarf, as well as the light reflecting on the pearls is very well done. That will be one for my favorites.
Eileen

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